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i think i'm getting better...

Post by [cc]z@nd! »

well, it's definitely better than my current... i was making it for a tutorial on basic sig creation on forums that me and my friends run (tinyurl.com/b4bkt)

first version
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second version, i think the text blends better in this one
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Post by wes »

you should color the background more.
try using borders.
the text is the first thing i look at when i see the signature, IMO it's a bad thing.

i see you made this for a basic sig, i guess it's OK. the bottom one is better
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Post by [cc]z@nd! »

yeah, i like the bottom one better, better text blending. i kinda like the black and white background, but the text does need to be toned down a bit, here's a more recent one. not much change..

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Post by wes »

better, but the bright whiteness of the text is still a little disturbing.
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problem is that the glow i have on it makes it kinda fuzzy, so lowering it's opacity more will make it harder to read. i'll work on it...
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The render is very low-quality and low-resolution.
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Post by xXxCocoFangxXx »

Very nice! Look good.
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RaVNzCRoFT wrote:The render is very low-quality and low-resolution.
i just snagged one off the internet somewhere and did the gaussian blur trick to blend it in a bit, and had the unblurred render's opactiy lowered some.
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Add a nice 1 pxl border.
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i did on that last one in the third post. 1 px black on the inside.
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Post by Phosphorous »

Ok, now fix the text on your current.

Lower the glows and raise the opacity and use a blend mode. Photoshop users love to use overlay, but I dont really now what that does O_O, so experiment with it.
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Nice :)
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Post by [cc]z@nd! »

will-do. man, this thread has too many snipers in it, i'm getting dizzy :P

edit: ok, here's another tweak. i changed the background to have a slight blue coloration, a bit stronger now. i couldn't change blending options on the text because it used a black font and the layer was set on screen, although i did mess with the glow options and transparency and fill.

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hmm, maybe a bit much blue...
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Post by Sandman »

Put the text layer on overlay and duplicate it a few times..

Then make a new layer, fill it with another color and mess with the blending modes (ie. overlay, colordodge, soft light).

And also, when you're blending, sometimes it helps to put a copy of the background layer overtop the render, then erase over the render with a low opacity eraser
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The blue looks kinda bad.
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[cc]z@nd! wrote:hmm, maybe a bit much blue...
Yeah...
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