Woman Vector[Wip]

mike0619 · Post by **mike0619** » Tue May 08, 2007 6:57 pm

Well Ive given C4D a break and have been messing around with Adobe Illustrator . I have been working on this vector on and off for about 2 days. This is my first full vector that I'm determined to finish. I really want to practice and get better when it comes to shading,transparency,curves,color, etc. I know it has alot of dirty paths and doesn't have much detail but its a wip. Its going to be a while before this is finished because I still have to do the face and faces have always been my trouble spot. Btw the hair is a bitch.

DA

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Tue May 08, 2007 7:07 pm

This is kind of bad even for a first. I expected better. >_>

Sgt.Peppers · Post by **Sgt.Peppers** » Tue May 08, 2007 7:09 pm

He's not done yet.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Tue May 08, 2007 7:24 pm

She*, and obviously. I'm saying that unless he completely destroys what he has now, there isn't much to do with it. He also said that was 2 days work, which I find hard to believe.

mike0619 · Post by **mike0619** » Tue May 08, 2007 7:30 pm

SHOUTrvb wrote:She*, and obviously. I'm saying that unless he completely destroys what he has now, there isn't much to do with it. He also said that was 2 days work, which I find hard to believe.

She? I didnt know mike was a common name for females and by 2 days I dont mean the whole 2 days I go to work and school.

there isn't much to do with it

Rofl

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Tue May 08, 2007 7:31 pm

mike0619 wrote:
SHOUTrvb wrote:She*, and obviously. I'm saying that unless he completely destroys what he has now, there isn't much to do with it. He also said that was 2 days work, which I find hard to believe.
She? I didnt know mike was a common name for females and by 2 days I dont mean the whole 2 days I go to work and school.

I think SHOUT was saying that the vector, who is a female, isn't completed.

It's a good start...looking forward to the finished piece.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Tue May 08, 2007 7:31 pm

He* as in mike, not the woman. In the past two days, how much time have you spent on it? For being vectored, the fingers look really rough. Other than thats, it seems like a pretty good start. Keep going, practice makes perfect.

mike0619 · Post by **mike0619** » Tue May 08, 2007 7:34 pm

Darco wrote:He* as in mike, not the woman. In the past two days, how much time have you spent on it? For being vectored, the fingers look really rough. Other than thats, it seems like a pretty good start. Keep going, practice makes perfect.

Well the first night was about an hour and today im going on 2. I didnt take all that time to make what you see now. I created and deleted alot of paths and layers experimenting. And yea the fingers do like weird but Im starting from top to bottom.

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Tue May 08, 2007 7:52 pm

The fingers kinda seem a bit too think. I'd like to see the original, just so we got some comparison.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Wed May 09, 2007 6:38 am

The fingers are also extremely jagged. My fingers are really weird looking and they're not even that jagged. And yes, for some reason I thought Darco was talking about the piece, my bad. The clothes look alright, and the eyes are pretty good, but there's nothing to say about the other stuff.

mike0619 · Post by **mike0619** » Wed May 09, 2007 2:52 pm

Heres the original(im not going to use the same colors) And yea its still a wip thats why the fingers look weird, it was a quick outline. Probably should have put that in my description cause everywhere i posted this people thought the final would look like that.

And about the bad quality I dont know if I have to change a setting or maybe a make it a different file type to like png.

XBC-Requiem · Post by **XBC-Requiem** » Wed May 09, 2007 8:30 pm

I realize that the absence is in the real picture, too, and I'm not trying to be a perv, but I'd add some cleavage (just a tid bit) to help make it stand out that the shirt is a v-cut.

(Once again, I'm going for detail, not perversion)

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Thu May 10, 2007 6:41 am

Perv.

Leiukemia · Post by **Leiukemia** » Thu May 10, 2007 2:19 pm

While I don't agree with Shout that it couldn't go somewhere, I do think you posted it too soon to give a proper opinion on it. Yes, right now it is rather boring, but I can't tell whether you're skilled enough to make it good or not.

INSANEdrive · Post by **INSANEdrive** » Thu May 10, 2007 4:53 pm

Leiukemia wrote:While I don't agree with Shout that it couldn't go somewhere, I do think you posted it too soon to give a proper opinion on it. Yes, right now it is rather boring, but I can't tell whether you're skilled enough to make it good or not.

I.E ...Update ?