[Skin] Alien Plasma Rifle

CmdAlien · Post by **CmdAlien** » Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:03 am

I made this skin today. It took awhile for me to get the colors just right. This is only my 4th skin, so any feedback on it would be great. Hope you all like it.
- Alien

bcnipod · Post by **bcnipod** » Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:12 am

try to make the colours blend more, then post it again in this thread.

CmdAlien · Post by **CmdAlien** » Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:28 am

bcnipod wrote:try to make the colours blend more, then post it again in this thread.

I will try to make it blend more, but this being my only skin with this kind of skin make up, I might not get it. I will try though thanks.

Mr.Brightside · Post by **Mr.Brightside** » Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:43 am

Looks like a shader swap.

MoDFox · Post by **MoDFox** » Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:18 am

No offense but that looks disgusting.
First off, the green parts aren't even the same shade.
But keep working on it, maybe not this one but try making another.

Andrew_b · Post by **Andrew_b** » Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:21 am

Gross

CmdAlien · Post by **CmdAlien** » Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:21 pm

gee thanks. Thanks for helping ppl lol.

CmdAlien · Post by **CmdAlien** » Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:25 pm

would it help you all if I changed the colors. OR do you all just not liek it over all?

hell_knight · Post by **hell_knight** » Sat Apr 26, 2008 7:09 pm

LMAO
you could instead make it just a shade of red, and give it the yellow cubemaps, that would look a lot better.

Philly · Post by **Philly** » Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:23 am

It's... corrupted?

Loor · Post by **Loor** » Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:15 pm

You guys are always really mean.

But Honestly, it looks like you just sprayed yellow paint on it. Try making the colours have a purpose. Like lines down the gun, rather than spays of paint.

DEEhunter · Post by **DEEhunter** » Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:18 pm

Looks like the plasma rifle barfed.

MarsMartianMan · Post by **MarsMartianMan** » Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:30 pm

Loor wrote:You guys are always really mean.

Its not being mean, its called critiquing. And we are critiquing this skin as a not very good skin.

CmdAlien · Post by **CmdAlien** » Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:32 pm

lol. Ok well I will make a new one and post it when I am done. I thought it was cool with the yellow/green on it, but I guess you guys do not. I will keep the bottom layer shade of red and put some other kinda design on it.

CmdAlien · Post by **CmdAlien** » Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:35 pm

well you all should at least tell me how to make it better. Only like 3 ppl have gave advice lol. Criticizing has no purpose if it does not help the person out.

MarsMartianMan · Post by **MarsMartianMan** » Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:37 pm

1. Stop double posting.

2.

hell_knight wrote:make it just a shade of red, and give it the yellow cubemaps, that would look a lot better.

CDK908 · Post by **CDK908** » Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:37 pm

what is that!?!?!?!? it looks like you took the brute plasma rifle from halo 2, which was already crappy in my opinion, and puke all over it and call it a skin. srry not very good like the others said.

Philly · Post by **Philly** » Mon Apr 28, 2008 8:22 am

I'll elaborate on my earlier post. This skin is corrupted; it should not have been posted. The colours don't match the plasma bolts or smoke, and neither does the gauge. The skin hasn't been clened up in any way, there is no new multipurpose or any new shaders. Think about these things before posting. A guy in the Mac section made a red plasma rifle skin, which turned out really nice because he changed all the things which i have mentioned.

Loor wrote:You guys are always really mean.

No, we're just honest. You don't get anywhere by sitting around lying about how nice things are.

CDK908 wrote:It looks like you took the brute plasma rifle from Halo 2, which was already crappy in my opinion

Don't insult the plasma riflez. I like plasma rifles. Do you like plasma rifles?

Loor · Post by **Loor** » Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:35 pm

Yeah, but all you say is,

"Yuck" "Corrupted" "Eww" etc.

When you could say something like

"I don't like it sorry. It looks like ....., you should ..... then it would look better."

CDK908 · Post by **CDK908** » Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:35 pm

Philly wrote:
CDK908 wrote:It looks like you took the brute plasma rifle from Halo 2, which was already crappy in my opinion
Don't insult the plasma riflez. I like plasma rifles. Do you like plasma rifles?

im not insaulting teh reg plasma rifles. i just don't like the brute's version of the pr. it has faster rof and overheat too quickly...and i thought it's against the rules to post dds formats?