Shocked

-DeToX- · Post by **-DeToX-** » Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:48 pm

V1
EDIT#1: More Focal Point...
EDIT#2: Less Alias.

C&C Please.

Sarb · Post by **Sarb** » Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:51 pm

Looks nice,

But you can't really tell whats going on, it needs a focal point.
Did my .psd help at all?

-DeToX- · Post by **-DeToX-** » Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:53 pm

Sarb wrote:Looks nice,
But you can't really tell whats going on, it needs a focal point.
Did my .psd help at all?

I told you that link wanted me to download a program to download the file, so go back on the IRC...

I fixed up the focal point more.

xlRainlx · Post by **xlRainlx** » Thu Aug 23, 2007 2:13 pm

me likes it. good work, again.

Xiion · Post by **Xiion** » Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:09 pm

it's a little aliased in some parts, and I rather dislike the kind of yellow used in it. fix those parts and it's win.

-DeToX- · Post by **-DeToX-** » Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:22 pm

Well alias I'm willing to change, but the yellow doesn't bother me in anyway, it was meant to be that way.

Thanks for the comment. Updated Alias.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:32 pm

Too busy, too random, nothing flows, and the colors look nasty together.

DJ_Gnomey · Post by **DJ_Gnomey** » Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:08 pm

God, why did you add the text, and make it look like you peed it on.

Needs to have a better color schee, it's focal point is ok, but the colors need to be fixed.