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halobuddha · Post by **halobuddha** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:04 am

First time using a C4D. As usual comments, ratings, and suggestions are welcome( As long as their mature and helpful ).

Should I current it? and someone please respond this time...

Aumaan Anubis · Post by **Aumaan Anubis** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:43 am

It looks allright, but it becomes too dark at the top left, obscuring too much of the text.

halobuddha · Post by **halobuddha** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:08 pm

I did that on purpose but I couldnt make the gradeint softer...

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:13 pm

It looks pretty cool, although you could have just made the gradient on another layer and adjusted that layer's opacity.

Patrickssj6 · Post by **Patrickssj6** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:51 pm

Looks very Aliased...even parts of the render.

halobuddha · Post by **halobuddha** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 4:27 pm

ahh... your right just noticed that. I shoulda used a better render

and i tried to blur the text a little to mask the aliasing. But it didnt really work. but should i current it?

Patrickssj6 · Post by **Patrickssj6** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 4:32 pm

Redo it. The background is quite nice if it would look more clean and higher quality.

Then current.

halobuddha · Post by **halobuddha** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:10 pm

k and ill take that suggestion with the text.

RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:31 pm

It just seems bland, like there's nothing particularly impressive about it.

halobuddha · Post by **halobuddha** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:37 pm

i know what you mean but my skill in photoshop isnt at that point yet.

RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:57 pm

Isn't at what point yet? Your skills are not developed enough to create anything that is impressive or not bland? Then that's something you should be working on.

HPDarkness · Post by **HPDarkness** » Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:03 am

It's ok, The colors are good. I've never been inside an Abercrombie's before. So I have no idea what cologne this is.

halobuddha · Post by **halobuddha** » Sun Dec 30, 2007 10:53 am

i am trying to work on creating something interesting but it takes time.

plushiefire · Post by **plushiefire** » Sun Dec 30, 2007 1:03 pm

Looks 3d, I really like it, besides that gaping hole of black in hte left side (no offense)

halobuddha · Post by **halobuddha** » Sun Dec 30, 2007 6:31 pm

yeah i think i went to far with the black