Bullet With Butterfly Wings

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Wed Dec 05, 2007 10:14 pm

Been working on this for most of today out of boredom. I think it turned out pretty cool

Critique and advice would be appreciated

Leiukemia · Post by **Leiukemia** » Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:20 pm

Looks cool, I like it. I dunno if "bullet with butterfly wings" is some sort of like a song or phrase from something, but if it isn't then the text looks pretty tacky being on there.

Kirk · Post by **Kirk** » Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:22 pm

It's interesting, i'll give you that.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:31 pm

Here's an updated version:

Thanks for the comments

I was a bit skeptical about the text on the bullet. Anything more I could do with it?

Dr.Cox · Post by **Dr.Cox** » Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:42 pm

Here try this.

No text =P

Or put it in the top Right corner and try setting it to overlay and sharpening and mess with eraser, and lightly erase some parts (set the opacity of the eraser brush around 5-10%) and such.

Pepsi · Post by **Pepsi** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 12:10 am

nice play on smashing pumpkins. i was always partial to the song 1979 and zero.

kornkidcrazy · Post by **kornkidcrazy** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 7:09 am

An idea for text is try to make the text look engraved on the shell of the bullet. That'd be kind of neat maybe....But it already looks very cool and it was a creative idea. Nice job JK!

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 7:58 am

kornkidcrazy wrote:An idea for text is try to make the text look engraved on the shell of the bullet. That'd be kind of neat maybe..

I disagree. The text on the first one is the best aside from the micro JK-47, but it's not great. If you're willing to sacrifice the main text, I'd just must the JK-47 to the top right and call it a sig. As for the sig itself, I really like it. I've seen those wings in a tutorial before, but I can safely say that yours look considerably better, and fit well with the bullet. Very nice job.

ic3fire · Post by **ic3fire** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 10:13 am

its ok

Leiukemia · Post by **Leiukemia** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 2:56 pm

Looks really good, job well done

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:36 pm

Update:

Thanks for all the comments

bibbit · Post by **bibbit** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:09 pm

I actually like V2's text more, but it's not bad.

The rest of it is Tebow-tastic.
Did I just say that?

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:51 pm

Much better. I'd remove those Live stats and current.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 7:59 pm

I just may do that.

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 8:10 pm

Not your best, but I like it. Took the song title literally, but that's not always bad.

Off-topic: Mellon Collie and the Infinite Sadness is definitely Smashing Pumpkins' best album (that's the one the song is from, if you didn't know).

Munsie · Post by **Munsie** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 8:13 pm

Lovin' v3. Glad you sigged it.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 8:17 pm

gh0570fchurch wrote:Not your best, but I like it. Took the song title literally, but that's not always bad.

Off-topic: Mellon Collie and the Infinite Sadness is definitely Smashing Pumpkins' best album (that's the one the song is from, if you didn't know).

I did

I have almost every SP album

I dunno, I think I like either Adore or Twilight to Starlight better

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 8:24 pm

Glad that it's sigged. Looking great.

Moar Off-Topic (we should continue this in PMs or MSN or something instead of keeping the spam

): Well, even so, I think it's agreed that all their pre-reunion stuff was much better. Though Zeitgeist isn't a bad album isn't bad, and it is under-rated, it just doesn't match up.

Plus, Billy Corgan shaved his head. ;_;

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Thu Dec 06, 2007 8:27 pm

Yeah... I like their older stuff a lot better.. Zeitgeist was a tragedy compared to their older stuff. I like it (a little), but their older stuff is way awesome.
And tbh, I think he looks a little less odd with a shaved head :p