Destiny

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 3:31 pm

I was just messin around in photoshop with a picture of a combine and some other things, and came up with this:

What do you think...?

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 3:34 pm

Too busy, no real flow to it either...

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 3:35 pm

Turn down the contrast and work on the colors a bit, and you've got yourself a pretty good brush sig. A more significant focal point would be nice, too.

{TP}Spartan · Post by **{TP}Spartan** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:03 pm

it looks a little too busy on the left side need more on the right

CabooseJr · Post by **CabooseJr** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:21 pm

It looks like you followed Titusz's tutorial.
could use a different font or something.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:38 pm

I'll try to make it a bit more simple, and work on a more solid color, and I didn't use brushes, or a tutorial :p

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:42 pm

Hmm, looks a lot like brushes. I still stand by what I said, just except for the brushes bit. Reminds me of a sig I made a long time ago:

Ugh.

Kirk · Post by **Kirk** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:47 pm

Colors are a bit weird.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:50 pm

gh0570fchurch wrote:Hmm, looks a lot like brushes. I still stand by what I said, just except for the brushes bit. Reminds me of a sig I made a long time ago:

Ugh.

They're renders I made :p

Here's a newer version:

CabooseJr · Post by **CabooseJr** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:53 pm

That looks much better.

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:57 pm

Ooh, much better. Maybe a little more of a focal point on the render. Maybe blur the background slightly (very) and sharpen the render about the same amount. The render might be better off to the left a bit instead of in the center as well.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 5:46 pm

I can't move the combine without messing up the sig, but I blurred the background to add a focus to the combine a little:

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 5:47 pm

Hmm, it's better than it was before. I rather like it.

Dsoup · Post by **Dsoup** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 6:15 pm

The pink on his forehead is gross, but other than that it's pretty good.

Titusz · Post by **Titusz** » Tue Nov 06, 2007 4:23 am

A couple of adjustment layers and it'll look awesome

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Tue Nov 06, 2007 6:28 am

Why would he add adjustment layers?

I think the text sticks out a little too much, but I really like the sig. It's pretty fantastic.

Titusz · Post by **Titusz** » Tue Nov 06, 2007 9:31 am

To get the ugly pink out.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Tue Nov 06, 2007 6:58 pm

I'll try to get the pink out, even though I don't see the problem :p
I'll fix the text as well.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Tue Nov 06, 2007 8:19 pm

The pink adds to it. I'm not seeing what Titusz sees apparently. The current has a ton of depth, which is great. Other than fixing the text, I'd say you're done and should current.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Tue Nov 06, 2007 8:30 pm

Like dis?