Shine

d3mon · Post by **d3mon** » Thu Sep 13, 2007 9:54 pm

http://jacksonsalt.deviantart.com/art/Shine-64758707

I like how this one came out.

-DeToX- · Post by **-DeToX-** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 4:49 am

Its nice, but too boring..

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 5:17 am

-DeToX- wrote:Its nice, but too boring..

Tural · Post by **Tural** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 5:58 am

Too much empty space. It's very distracting and unappealing.

JunkfoodMan · Post by **JunkfoodMan** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 8:05 am

Awesome. I LOVE the lighting.

noscottno · Post by **noscottno** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 5:30 pm

http://noscottno.deviantart.com/art/Shine-52731444

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Dsoup · Post by **Dsoup** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 6:40 pm

I don't like the text, and it's kind of boring, but overall it looks pretty good.

turk645 · Post by **turk645** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 6:46 pm

hey, this isn't helsing related

, a cookie for anyone who gets that.

looks good though, what all did you do to make it?

Kirk · Post by **Kirk** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 6:56 pm

noscottno wrote:http://noscottno.deviantart.com/art/Shine-52731444

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Why did you post that? Don't advertise please.

As for the piece, I think a diagonal ray of light would have worked better, and to counter the problems of having wasted space, you could create a stony (or anything, actually) like background, but barely eluminated at all, just enough to make it seem like something's there.

bibbit · Post by **bibbit** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 7:33 pm

Kirk wrote:Why did you post that?

He was pointing out the similarity in the names.

Sgt.Peppers · Post by **Sgt.Peppers** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 7:34 pm

It looks good, just narrow the canvas, so there won't be so much ugly empty space.

Lt Slap a ho · Post by **Lt Slap a ho** » Sat Sep 15, 2007 7:38 am

I love it.

noscottno · Post by **noscottno** » Sat Sep 15, 2007 1:17 pm

Kirk wrote:
noscottno wrote:http://noscottno.deviantart.com/art/Shine-52731444

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Why did you post that? Don't advertise please.

As for the piece, I think a diagonal ray of light would have worked better, and to counter the problems of having wasted space, you could create a stony (or anything, actually) like background, but barely eluminated at all, just enough to make it seem like something's there.

I was showing that the names and overall idea of both pieces are similar.

d3mon · Post by **d3mon** » Sun Sep 16, 2007 1:49 am

Kirk wrote:
noscottno wrote:http://noscottno.deviantart.com/art/Shine-52731444

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Why did you post that? Don't advertise please.

As for the piece, I think a diagonal ray of light would have worked better, and to counter the problems of having wasted space, you could create a stony (or anything, actually) like background, but barely eluminated at all, just enough to make it seem like something's there.

You don't mind of actually use that whole idea do you?

Sorry noscottno i didn't realise you had a piece with the same name uh do you mind if i leave it though?

noscottno · Post by **noscottno** » Sun Sep 16, 2007 10:18 am

d3mon wrote:
Kirk wrote:
noscottno wrote:http://noscottno.deviantart.com/art/Shine-52731444

V_v
Why did you post that? Don't advertise please.

As for the piece, I think a diagonal ray of light would have worked better, and to counter the problems of having wasted space, you could create a stony (or anything, actually) like background, but barely eluminated at all, just enough to make it seem like something's there.
You don't mind of actually use that whole idea do you?

Sorry noscottno i didn't realise you had a piece with the same name uh do you mind if i leave it though?

No of course not, go ahead and keep it.