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I don't know what it is, but the bricks look a bit fake for me. Other than that, I think it's a cool concept.
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The bricks look fake aswell as the text, actually its pretty easy to tell that the text is* fake.
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Post by -DeToX- »

Way too simple, too boring, and not much depth. In my opinion I dislike it.

Try reading up on some tutorials, that way you'll get better.

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If you made the whole thing, I'd say you did a pretty good job.
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CabooseJr wrote:The bricks look fake aswell as the text, actually its pretty easy to tell that the text isnt fake.
dude u wanna restate that for me?

yes i made it all
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Post by Tural »

I believe he meant to say "is fake."

Anyways, the bricks are ridiculously easy.
Fill with gradient. Filter > Texture. Done.

From there, the text was simply put on, it doesn't give any impression that it's actually on the "wall."
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Tural wrote: actually on the "wall."
and how would u sugeust u would make it look like it was on the wall
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I would suggest that you work on the bricks first. It's so low quality that the everything is blended because you can barely tell what's going on. I'd get some higher detailed bricks (and resolution for that matter), and learn to use your layer styles.
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It's pretty blurry and the graffiti looks kinda fake.
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It's blurry and hurts the eyes. Try sharpening it a bit, and try adding some depth.
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Looks like you used Microsoft Paint to make that. I would say it is good if you made it in M$ Paint. If not then it is bad.
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Keablr wrote:Looks like you used Microsoft Paint to make that. I would say it is good if you made it in M$ Paint. If not then it is bad.
i basically did use that, just a diff program with some of the same stuff.
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Well what did you use?
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idk...here lemme c lol.


ok it is called photofiltre.
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I don't like it, but keep trying. There's some ideas flowing out of that mind.
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Post by Lt Slap a ho »

Not so good. =/ anyway, just keep trying, you will get there.
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