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First space art I've made in a while.

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Neato, but it's a little boring and the clouds look unnatural.
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I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.
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Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.
Yup, it's painted.
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noscottno wrote:
Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.
Yup, it's painted.
I thought I would be nice and you would get the hint, but obviously you didn't. It's painted badly.
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Dsoup wrote:
noscottno wrote:
Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.
Yup, it's painted.
I thought I would be nice and you would get the hint, but obviously you didn't. It's painted badly.
Any pointers? What type of motion should I make with my arm? What types of brushes?because you seem to act like you are all knowing
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Pretty good concept, but those black parts in front of the light looks rather strange. I think it could use some darker parts, seems rather blue, even for a nebula.
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Post by DisceCruxLogos »

The painting is really scratchy and unrealistic, where as the planets look much more detailed. You've certainly become a better painter, and this is pretty nice other than the things mentioned above.
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noscottno wrote:
Dsoup wrote:
noscottno wrote:
Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.
Yup, it's painted.
I thought I would be nice and you would get the hint, but obviously you didn't. It's painted badly.
Any pointers? What type of motion should I make with my arm? What types of brushes?because you seem to act like you are all knowing
11. Do not yell and make a fuss because someone gave you criticism. If everyone only said good things about your work, how would you improve?
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I'm making a fuss? I'm asking for critism other than "it looks bad".
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I did, it's actually quite detailed.
Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.
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Actually, I really like it. I mean yeah, the clouds don't look very convincing, but that's my favorite part about it... Call me weird..
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Just because something doesn't look convincing doesn't mean it can't be artistically well-done. I quite like it.
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Thank's guys. :) I plan on making another one soon (may start today, dunno).
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