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good concept, needs more depth and detail.
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Post by GametagAeonFlux »

Draw your perspective lines on a different layer so you can disable them...it may be a concept drawing, but we don't need to see them.

Random erased bits on the left look kinda weird, and your strokes are still a little too definite. I suggest using the Corel Painter line of programs instead of Photoshop for digital painting/drawing.
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Looks nice, but like GTAF said it would look a lot better without the grids.
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Post by CabooseJr »

reminds me the inside of the Combine Citadel of City 17.
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CabooseJr wrote:reminds me the inside of the Combine Citadel of City 17.
I was just thinking that...

I love it noscottno, you are pretty good at that tablet :)
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Post by Alexander »

The building's shapes and colors are good, but the perspective lines and the random squiggly black brushes and the solid eraser on the very left kill it for me.
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Post by Sgt.Peppers »

Cool.

I like.
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Post by youhoo7 »

looks beautiful
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I love it. Can't wait to see the final.
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gh0570fchurch wrote:I love it. Can't wait to see the final.
Cough...it's done I don't plan on working on it anymore. Thanks guys.
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Post by Guest »

needs vocal point and little more detail
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ok ya realize that now i was in a hurry when i looked at it, but some colors are to light.
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I thought I nailed the colors pretty good :/. I guess it's just a matter of opinion.
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