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ok well ive been focusing more on 3ds than photoshop lately and i think this render is rather decent. I finished it on sunday mornig(rendering) and im workin on another scene now.

-the material is supposed to be like a reflective transparent type thing(its in a book i read)
-8hrs of modeling(navigating took a long ass time also includes pre-renders lol)
-2hrs of rendering(goddam raytrace and squares...)

ok i had to put up on deviantart cuz they let me put anysize i want..

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52217141/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52217611/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52217361/

id like you input comments suggestions w/e any input at all... Please!
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Post by G.I.R. »

Too much Greeble.
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Post by bronchidus »

ehh there was really no other way to make it look "futuristic" w/o it its ok on everything BUT the middle part and the turrets part not on the tubes tho. I like the docking bays the most lol
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Post by Darco »

wow. thats awesome. texturing that is gonna be a bitch though. hell, uv'ing it would be a nightmare.
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Looks neat, I'll take the liberity of adding you the the dA database.
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Post by Nitemare »

looks like a gaint disco ball in space lol.
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Post by TomClancey »

I don't like how you used the greeble. You just added a single greeble and kept on all the widgets. I'd suggest reading this tutorial. It helps to use greeble well. I'm not saying your scene is bad, it just could be better, if you utilized the greeble tool a bit better.
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Post by Infern0 »

Greeble overusage?

Learn how to use them right, it doesn't look too good now.. but you'll learn, it's a nice start. ;)
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Post by GametagAeonFlux »

Way too reflective, and as others have said, way too much Greeble. But it's not bad...all that stuff is fixable, nice job.
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Post by bronchidus »

i know i used too much greeble already stated lol. Thanks for the input too.
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