Crit?

noscottno · Post by **noscottno** » Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:51 pm

Before I post this on deviant art, I wanted some opinions on how to make it better. I've been workin on and off for five days.

Posed on dev.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/51393081/

Lambda · Post by **Lambda** » Wed Mar 21, 2007 2:25 pm

hmm, mehbe make the ring on the planet no sto weak looking

RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Wed Mar 21, 2007 3:04 pm

Looks very good, but it's too small for my tastes.

noscottno · Post by **noscottno** » Wed Mar 21, 2007 5:52 pm

Thanks, keep 'em comin'.

Dsoup · Post by **Dsoup** » Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:55 pm

A lot better then your last two, but the planet is sort of Greenish on one side, and I personally like terragens to go with them. All in all gj.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Thu Mar 22, 2007 7:02 am

Very nice. Planet at the bottom looks pretty messed up, but a good piece all in all. I love the long canvas, but I would also make it longer next time. Then make it a print.

Xiion · Post by **Xiion** » Thu Mar 22, 2007 8:20 am

the newer version is the best.

we need to come up with our concept for our submission to the next 2 spaceartists pack very soon scott. we will be taking all of our time on it, so a great concept is key here.

Ombre · Post by **Ombre** » Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:58 am

Everything it too sharp.

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Thu Mar 22, 2007 5:09 pm

I like it.