First Space Scene

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First Space Scene

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Alright this is my first space scene. I was really messing with light in this one. Tell me what you guys think.
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Post by CabooseJr »

everything seems a bit too sharp.
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

It's too small.
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I know it is a bit small.
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Post by JunkfoodMan »

Although its small, Its fucking awesome. I love it. Just, the Space seems a bit Monotonal, or has no colour at all.
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Post by HPDarkness »

Wouldn't that small planet in the back be completely lit, the way that the lighting is set up? Good for a first but don't over sharpen your images and try toning down the outer glow just a bit.
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I like it a lot. Good job with lighting.
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Post by Keablr »

Thanks for the comments, my next will be bigger and less sharpened
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Post by r0tten »

i like it but like everyone else said, it needs to be much larger. i made the same mistake with my first scene. good job though and keep it up.
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Post by noscottno »

My thoughts or basically what everyone said. That's great for a first one, beats the hell out of my first.
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Post by Keablr »

Thanks for the comments, and thanks NSN but I don't think my first one space scene is better than yours. But thanks for that comment
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