Cortana: The Creation - Chapter 2

metkillerjoe · Post by **metkillerjoe** » Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:23 pm

Table of Contents:

-Prologue
-Chapter 1: Vanderbrook
-Chapter 2: All in a Days work

Cortana: The Creation

Prologue:

The year is 2105 Robert Stevenson was a revolutionary in neuro-science and a futurist. He controlled the company known as OPEN. The government controlled his funding, so it wasn

Tural · Post by **Tural** » Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:43 pm

So, um.. what?

metkillerjoe · Post by **metkillerjoe** » Sat Mar 03, 2007 1:44 pm

Hmm, well, I'm writing the first chapter. Just like a WIP. Post comments...

HPDarkness · Post by **HPDarkness** » Sat Mar 03, 2007 11:53 pm

I like it, Great job. You should really continue this, it's good!

Geo · Post by **Geo** » Sun Mar 04, 2007 2:38 am

I count numerous grammar and punctuation errors.

bricksarefun · Post by **bricksarefun** » Sun Mar 04, 2007 8:00 am

iGeo wrote:I count numerous grammar and punctuation errors.

Well Firefox says your name is spelled wrong ;o
This is pretty good, but why did you write it?

[cc]z@nd! · Post by **[cc]z@nd!** » Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:00 am

iGeo wrote:I count numerous grammar and punctuation errors.

me too, but advance copies will fix that. (copies of the book are sent out before publication and read by people. it's like beta testing)

so far, so good. keep up the work.

metkillerjoe · Post by **metkillerjoe** » Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:03 pm

Chapter 1: Vanderbrook

Dr. Catherine Halsey entered the silent debriefing room. There were several men and women of the neuroscience community waiting here to hear what Catherine was about to say and do. They were all civilians, but unlike Halsey, they wore suites the closely resembled the type of suite an officer would wear aboard a ship. They were the handpicked men and women that Dr. Halsey chose to perform an operation that would create the first AI from a living person.

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:12 pm

Okay, I find myself very confused...

metkillerjoe · Post by **metkillerjoe** » Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:14 pm

With what?

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:18 pm

The entire thing. I just kind of skimmed through it, I'll try to find the time to read it all the way through tomorrow.

metkillerjoe · Post by **metkillerjoe** » Sun Mar 04, 2007 5:03 pm

I could understand it being confusing if you just skimmed.

Aumaan Anubis · Post by **Aumaan Anubis** » Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:23 pm

people more appreciate these book-type stuff over at the http://www.bungie.net forums.

hell_knight · Post by **hell_knight** » Thu Mar 08, 2007 12:01 pm

cortana is hot!

metkillerjoe · Post by **metkillerjoe** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 3:54 pm

Chapter 2: All in a Days Work

Tonegawa checked his experiment one last time. Everything had to be perfect, and the timing was critical.
Ding!

r0tten · Post by **r0tten** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 4:39 pm

cliffs pls k thnx

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 5:38 pm

Really cool, I always like to read up on why things where made, and you portrayed it very well.