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Version 1:
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Post by GametagAeonFlux »

I like v1 better than v2. I still like v2, but if I had to choose, I'd say v1.

Anyway, looks very nice, I say you work on an even larger canvas and expand this piece...it seems like this is only part of a whole piece.
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They both are awesome but v1 is way better, love v1 it is amazing :shock:
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Post by maca_§ »

That's some awesome painting :).
The first one's definatly best but I'd say get rid of the planet for both.. doesn't match the scene at all and shadow is way too harsh.

Good job overall.
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i like v2.
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Post by TomClancey »

Wow, very nice. I <3 v1, but v2 is still good. Also as others said the planet doesn't seem to fit real well.
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Post by gh0570fchurch »

Really good. I especially like the shadow cast by the planet on the right side... :D
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Post by Tsuin Taiyou »

Lol, I'm looking at them from my sister's computer and I see what you guysmean by the shadow...It didn't look too harsh on my computer. I'll fix it later.
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Post by Xiion »

i see alot that can be better, but its better than all of your latest things. you should paint on a bigger canvas.
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Post by G.I.R. »

Looks great; I love alot of your work, Tsuin.
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Post by Cuda »

Get the text away from the focal. try putting it in the low right hand corner with a light off-black(Reaally dark Purple) color.


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