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Hey guys, well this is my first space scene, and also my first render overall.

I made this in 3ds Max, not photoshop.

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Post by metkillerjoe »

Not bad. Not bad.

I'm not an expert, but that looks pretty darn good. Keep it up. :)
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Post by [cc]z@nd! »

the terrain isn't really that great, i'd suggest reading a terrain tutorial.

otherwise, not bad, nice work.
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Post by fishface617 »

Well, I actually did follow this tutorial. The original outcome wasnt so great so i fooled around a lot of the settings and made what I just posted.

But ill look into that if I make another scene.
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Post by funkadelik_bob »

the terrain is pointy. maybe adding more vertexes or w/e to make it a little more softer.

but gj
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The earth looks weird, and flat, and it needs an atomosphere.
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Space scenes made in 3ds never look good, learn how to make then in photoshop.
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Post by fishface617 »

Thanks for the feedback, I dont own photoshop, and im interested in learning max, so I thought I might try and make a scene.
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Post by GametagAeonFlux »

NSN711 wrote:Space scenes made in 3ds never look good, learn how to make then in photoshop.
hahahahahahahahahahahah

Educate yourself kid.

Anyway, the terrain looks kinda bad, and the Earth needs some sort of texture other than a diffuse map, and the Sun might be a tad small.
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Post by r0tten »

looks alright, the terrain could use some work, i'm glad to see this recent influx in space scenes, it's cool to see alot of people interested in this sort of photoshopping and such.
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Educate yourself kid.
*Educates self* Wow, nvm.
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