My First Sig

Venom08 · Post by **Venom08** » Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:31 pm

Any honest thoughts?
Constructive criticism would be nice.. i'm trying to learn.
Thanks a lot for your opinion!

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:32 pm

thats huge.
the background seems very plain, add something to it. then we'll see how that looks.

Venom08 · Post by **Venom08** » Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:37 pm

Alright, Thanks a lot for the pointers.. i'll work on it

RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Fri Jan 12, 2007 1:15 pm

Try blending colors. Green on red is...well, bad.

Venom08 · Post by **Venom08** » Mon Jan 15, 2007 10:45 pm

Thanks.. I kinda stopped working on that.. but then I moved on to this.. it's just a little picture I added to this one site I visit a lot. I created every little piece of this.. including the glass.. learned some 3ds

Tell me what you think.

EDIT: What sounds more emo-
"Does it have to end like this?"
or
"Must we hide behind shadows?"

I'm trying to make it as emo as possible lol... please don't flame

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Mon Jan 15, 2007 11:02 pm

*sob* does it always have to end like this?

JunkfoodMan · Post by **JunkfoodMan** » Tue Jan 16, 2007 12:33 pm

Vector-like glass? Yes.
Emo-ness? Not really :S
Looks great, BIG Improvement.

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:40 pm

Venom08 wrote:
EDIT: What sounds more emo-
"Does it have to end like this?"
or
"Must we hide behind shadows?"

I'm trying to make it as emo as possible lol... please don't flame

"If you don't like me, I will Cut my wrist veins out with my rusty wristblade, then Dye my hair black, say I'm a punk Rocker and listen to New Age."

Venom08 · Post by **Venom08** » Tue Jan 16, 2007 9:34 pm

Cuda wrote:
Venom08 wrote:
EDIT: What sounds more emo-
"Does it have to end like this?"
or
"Must we hide behind shadows?"

I'm trying to make it as emo as possible lol... please don't flame

"If you don't like me, I will Cut my wrist veins out with my rusty wristblade, then Dye my hair black, say I'm a punk Rocker and listen to New Age."

Hahahhahah... I'm trying to keep it short..

Thanks everyone for the feedback!

[cc]z@nd! · Post by **[cc]z@nd!** » Wed Jan 17, 2007 4:04 pm

the glass is good, and the hearts fit, although it feels like they're just a brush.

as for the sig, the background and blending could use some work, but i suppose it's passable. check out some tutorials on deviantart or greycobra

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Thu Jan 18, 2007 1:19 pm

So im not the only person that will make an emo piece once in a while.

Venom08 · Post by **Venom08** » Fri Jan 19, 2007 11:19 am

Phosphorous wrote:So im not the only person that will make an emo piece once in a while.

Wanna show some stuff you've made?

I'm interested

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Fri Jan 19, 2007 6:04 pm

Sure, just check out my deviant art.

http://criticalzer0.deviantart.com/