not bad, but the other one is just inverted and rotated, but it'll work for a good grunge/dark sig. personally, i like the second one. oh, and please type in normal font, or at least close to normal size.
ASPARTAME: in your diet soda and artificial sweeteners. also, it's obviously completely safe. it's not like it will cause tumors or anything. >.>
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