WIP Scene

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Fri Nov 24, 2006 7:49 pm

Very nice

RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:04 pm

Awesome, although I think it would make more sense to have the grunt's plasma pistol up at the ready.

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Fri Nov 24, 2006 11:41 pm

RaVNzCRoFT wrote:Awesome, although I think it would make more sense to have the grunt's plasma pistol up at the ready.

well, no, if MasterChief Tries to rin, he can just shoot out his knee.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Fri Nov 24, 2006 11:44 pm

Nice job on the scenery also, I forgot to mention that

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 9:10 am

Better?

FleetAdmiralBacon · Post by **FleetAdmiralBacon** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 12:19 pm

Is it just me, or are the bumps too deep on the boxes in the back?

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 3:03 pm

thats something im about to change, and they will be tiled more. any other suggestions?

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:39 pm

They don't really look like they're fighting.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:58 pm

they're not supposed to be fighting. hes like being arrested or something.

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 8:12 pm

Oh ok, now it makes more sense.

Maybe make it more obvious that that's what youre trying to convey.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 8:21 pm

when its done, ill add some kind of border text or something.

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MaestroMan · Post by **MaestroMan** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 10:43 am

FuNkIlIcIuS!!11

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 11:54 am

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 12:21 pm

Honestly, all the characters arent that well positioned. The elites should be in a more aggresive stance, like they're about to lunge into him with the pikes.

The MC should be more on the defensive, maybe his knees more bent, so he could like duck and throw the grenade on one of them.

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 7:47 pm

Make the grunt stand on the barrels.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 5:36 pm

Doctor · Post by **Doctor** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 2:39 pm

I think it looks good. The scene almost depicts as if Master Cheif was caught of gaurd, maybe about to shoot the grunt or stick the elite when the other one came up form behind him.

Phosphorous wrote:The MC should be more on the defensive, maybe his knees more bent, so he could like duck and throw the grenade on one of them.

Maybe they are negoitaing (spls lawl)

Peace out,
Dococ