[wip]-spartan lazer

rasillon · Post by **rasillon** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:55 am

now i know somone else was doing one of these but i started making this model a few days before him possibly a week but didnt show mine as i didnt think it would be worth showing untill now i still have a lot of work to do but my model is basicly detailed and skinned i plan on making it better and putting this into halo ce and convert for pc as well.
un-skinned and before i added my barel:
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6756/hmmmmbmbpy2.jpg
skinned with barrel added along side to refernce picture:
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/5708 ... mb3vv9.jpg
i still have to pix a few uw wraps i know that am in the process of doing that now i do intend on addmin more detail but not to much other wise the mod it will be in would lag.
constructive crit appreciated.

avp DR@AGON · Post by **avp DR@AGON** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:57 am

some1 was already working on a spartan laser but yours looks more detailed

rasillon · Post by **rasillon** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:58 am

avp DR@AGON wrote:some1 was already working on a spartan laser but yours looks more detailed

there first 6 words in my sentence says i know that and i started mine a few days before he posted his here.
just never thought it was worth showing.

xGhostlySnowx · Post by **xGhostlySnowx** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:09 am

very nice are you almost finished cause i couldnt tell the difrence between the real thing and the picture. I only figured it out by the symbol in the corner. Good Job

M4573R51337 · Post by **M4573R51337** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:14 am

Good job on it. I like it alot.

rasillon · Post by **rasillon** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:16 am

yeah im nearly done just wanna add more detail fix some flaws in the uvw and add a bit of smoothing groups.
id like some advice and constructive crit as well from some of the more experiecnced modelers so i can figure how to improve this is my first ever plane model so i need to know where i can improve at.

Doom · Post by **Doom** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:36 am

I don't like the texture and I seriously doubt you have been working on this for a week before the other guy =\. Looks like all you did was use the image refrence psted a few days ago modled it quickly and threw the same bitmap on it as the picture.

Not very orignal =\. Atleast mine will have a coustom texture =\.

-Doom

JunkfoodMan · Post by **JunkfoodMan** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:45 am

Doom wrote:I don't like the texture and I seriously doubt you have been working on this for a week before the other guy =\. Looks like all you did was use the image refrence psted a few days ago modled it quickly and threw the same bitmap on it as the picture.

Not very orignal =\. Atleast mine will have a coustom texture =\.

-Doom

[/hijack]
So much for constrictive criticism

Looks great, after looking at it, I think it may need a teency bit more detail.
Looks amazing, I smell a H3 mod.

rasillon · Post by **rasillon** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:48 am

Doom wrote:I don't like the texture and I seriously doubt you have been working on this for a week before the other guy =\. Looks like all you did was use the image refrence psted a few days ago modled it quickly and threw the same bitmap on it as the picture.

Not very orignal =\. Atleast mine will have a coustom texture =\.

-Doom

actuly i have just thought it wouldnt be a smart idea saying that id seen the h3 pics before alot of people.......
have your doubts but i know who is right and i aint the one wrong.

Doom · Post by **Doom** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:57 am

rasillon wrote:
Doom wrote:I don't like the texture and I seriously doubt you have been working on this for a week before the other guy =\. Looks like all you did was use the image refrence psted a few days ago modled it quickly and threw the same bitmap on it as the picture.

Not very orignal =\. Atleast mine will have a coustom texture =\.

-Doom
actuly i have just thought it wouldnt be a smart idea saying that id seen the h3 pics before alot of people.......
have your doubts but i know who is right and i aint the one wrong.

I saw the pictures before a lot of people too =\. Atleast I don't have to go OMGWTFBBQ I MADE MY MODEL BEFORE EVEYONE BCUZ I R KOOL AND I SAW ILLEGAL SCANS OMGWTFBBQ!111!oneelvenfactorial!!!!11 LIEK OMG!! I M NOT WRONGZORZ!!11!! I R JUST IN DENIAL!!1!1!!!11elven!11

I gues that is what the forums have come to =\.

-Doom

rasillon · Post by **rasillon** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 8:03 am

Doom wrote: I saw the pictures before a lot of people too =\. Atleast I don't have to go OMGWTFBBQ I MADE MY MODEL BEFORE EVEYONE BCUZ I R KOOL AND I SAW ILLEGAL SCANS OMGWTFBBQ!111!oneelvenfactorial!!!!11 LIEK OMG!! I M NOT WRONGZORZ!!11!! I R JUST IN DENIAL!!1!1!!!11elven!11

I gues that is what the forums have come to =\.

-Doom

i was merely pointing out i had started this model before the other guy and didnt want to be flamed for making a model and being called a copycat and fyi i didnt come here saying wtf and all that crap so drop the attitude either give advice on how i can get better or gtfo out of my thread.

Explosive American · Post by **Explosive American** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 9:04 am

That's actually the concept render they had, not the final.

rasillon · Post by **rasillon** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 9:12 am

Explosive American wrote:That's actually the concept render they had, not the final.

yeah i know but ive heard thers two variations the green tinted version is marines the more grey version is spartans version.
i just wanted to make a model using a reference picture.
saw the spartan laser and thought it might be nice to see what i can do.

StalkingGrunt911 · Post by **StalkingGrunt911** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 9:12 am

M4573R51337 wrote:Good job on it. I like it alot.

Doom · Post by **Doom** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 9:15 am

Well if you want advice make your own texture =|

-Doom

Jsk1610 · Post by **Jsk1610** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:06 am

It's missing a few things, but it's still good.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 11:17 am

The texture looks cool besides all the white.

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 12:59 pm

fix those messed up faces on the grip area. they bug. you also need to add details. it's pretty lacking.

uncutshadow · Post by **uncutshadow** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 1:10 pm

this is awsome. im my mod i would use rasillon's more than doom's. i like rasillons because it looks better period

M4573R51337 · Post by **M4573R51337** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 4:49 pm

Who says they would let you?

Anyway, I like Dooms because his is more custom, Rad's is more of a trace than a completely custom weapon. Scooby's SL is the best IMO