WIP Scene

Dr.Cox · Post by **Dr.Cox** » Sat Nov 04, 2006 10:46 pm

Theres something wrong looking with his head. The mc's head. and i dont like that he just holding a Stickie.

V0Lt4Ge · Post by **V0Lt4Ge** » Sun Nov 05, 2006 7:45 am

^^That, and is it me or is the picture low quality?

The elite looks pretty good though.

metkillerjoe · Post by **metkillerjoe** » Sun Nov 05, 2006 8:17 am

V0Lt4Ge wrote:^^That, and is it me or is the picture low quality?

The elite looks pretty good though.

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Master Chief is just standing there with a sticky grenade. Fix his stance alittle bit and it may look much nicer.

Dr.Cox · Post by **Dr.Cox** » Mon Nov 06, 2006 8:42 am

metkillerjoe wrote:
V0Lt4Ge wrote:^^That, and is it me or is the picture low quality?

The elite looks pretty good though.
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Master Chief is just standing there with a sticky grenade. Fix his stance alittle bit and it may look much nicer.

"HA! you have a very sharp stick... and me... i have a unactivated stickie grendade.,, OWNED."

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:40 pm

lol mc is standing like all he wants to do is be friends with the elite.

Tural · Post by **Tural** » Mon Nov 06, 2006 3:02 pm

Seems decent.

Also, apparently I'm the only one who understands the concept of "WIP," eh?

Dr.Cox · Post by **Dr.Cox** » Mon Nov 06, 2006 5:33 pm

Tural wrote:Seems decent.

Also, apparently I'm the only one who understands the concept of "WIP," eh?

Aparrantly we are just stating what we thing is wrong about his "WIP,"eh?

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:19 pm

Looks like he's giving the sticky back to the elite. Add some more lighting on the MC. The elite seems to glow in comparison to him, and the Mc is all dark.

Hyperdash · Post by **Hyperdash** » Thu Nov 09, 2006 2:49 am

Make MC hold the nade a little more dramatic and make it glowing. For the elite I think a ES would look better then a stick.

Advanced Alien grenade > a sharp glowing stick

Infern0 · Post by **Infern0** » Thu Nov 09, 2006 1:44 pm

Okay, you got the scene but the atmosphere isn't quite right. You need to tune the lights, add some moisture to the air(to make it look thicker and realister/cooler), in other words, just make the air look foggier.. but not too much.

Nice job, but you have some work to do!

BEEF!!! · Post by **BEEF!!!** » Thu Nov 09, 2006 3:50 pm

Video post->Glow on the grenade (Provided this is Max).
Surround them in fog.
Create->Helpers->Atmospherics->Box gizmo.
Draw out 4 boxes surrounding the seen.
Click one of the boxes and click the button add and click volumetric fog.
Do the same for the rest.
Adjust settings of fog as you want.
Render.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Thu Nov 09, 2006 5:57 pm

actually, i have volumetric light in that, its just turned way down. and i have one with video post but it wasnt that good looking. ill post it if you want.

and also, thanks for the advice. ill be sure to use it when i open max next.

Infern0 · Post by **Infern0** » Fri Nov 10, 2006 5:12 am

Oh yeah.

Use GI, it will make the scene look brilliant ;p.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Fri Nov 10, 2006 6:04 pm

small update.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Sat Nov 11, 2006 12:53 am

It's pretty good, but the room could be a bit better. I don't know if you planned on making it more scenic, but i'm just putting the suggestion out there

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Sat Nov 11, 2006 1:43 am

Much Better, but do a bit more with the grenade. It just seems... pathetic compared to the rest of it. This is Master Chief, He's suppose to be some kind of futuristic Rambo -ish guy, but why does he only have a plasma grenade? Give him a smaller gun, like a pistol or something.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Sat Nov 11, 2006 8:18 am

ok. and yeah im gonna add soemthing to the scene, i just dont know what yet.

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Sun Nov 12, 2006 12:03 pm

Try making mc look like he's ready to fight. Possibly in a fighting stance, with his feet spread out a little more.

benman08 · Post by **benman08** » Mon Nov 13, 2006 3:29 pm

http://media.putfile.com/Tests-82
Made awhile back, me and Darco are fixing it up. I'm basically redoing the animation.