[Model] AK-47

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[Model] AK-47

Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

The one thing I don't like is that poly error on the front of the weapon. I just can't get rid of it.

Third weapon model ever.


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Oops, forgot a wireframe. I'll post it if anyone wants it. :leet:
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:shock: Nice Job... I cant wait to see the Final!
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Post by dos mes »

Not too shabby :) Try making it a little bit more detailed though and it would be awesome.
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Post by cooldude5990 »

not bad but missing key details, if you want i can circle what you can fix but only with your permission, i dont want to draw all over it unless you want me to
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Of course you have permission. Also, I know I didn't do the scope thing on the back. :wink:
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Post by Dr.Cox »

Oh... the ammo clip looks wierdish
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Post by cooldude5990 »

alright now i now its a wip so some of this like the rear site you will but i added it just as a reminder

1 Your missing the gas chamber under the barrel

2 the hole isnt an actual hole, it goes threw to the other side you shouldnt see inside the model

3 The site

4 the foregrip isnt fluent with the gun and the bottom should be alot more rounded

5 the above indent should be where the circle is, and more of a rectangle

6 this is a rectangle that is longer, shouldnt realy be a cylender

7 the grip is skinnier than the reciever

8 the stock isnt fluent with the gun and its more rounded


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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Sweet, thanks for all the critiques!

As for the gas chamber, I was going to do it, but something happened...I forget what...and I didn't do it. I'll do that later.

As for the back sight, I'll also do that later.

As for the shoulder stock, the bottom is kind of flat, but the top of it is more rounded like what you're talking about.

And as for the holes, they are actually holes that go through the whole way. However, the light sources make it look like you can see into the gun as opposed to into a hole. I'm bad at rendering, so that's why it looks weird. I also suppose you could have seen that if I had posted a wireframe render. So that's also my fault. :P


And as for all the other details, at this point I'm more focused on being able to add details, rather than adding details and staying on my reference images. But thanks a whole lot! Your comments really helped!
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Post by rossmum »

Along with what cooldude already pointed out, the barrel assembly looks a little too small diameter-wise, the front sight assembly needs to have a hole right through the middle, and it looks like it's been chamfered which isn't really necessary as you won't see the front of it up close enough to notice. The magazine should be a different shape viewed from above or below (google it), and the chamfer on the top of the gun looks like it's been overdone. Trigger guard also looks a bit narrow.

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Post by The science of Kaboom »

cooldude5990 wrote: 8 the stock isnt fluent with the gun and its more rounded
Your moms not fluent with the gun! OOHHHHH you just got pwned! jk, anyways its an ok model looks too blocky imo.
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The science of Kaboom wrote:
cooldude5990 wrote: 8 the stock isnt fluent with the gun and its more rounded
Your moms not fluent with the gun! OOHHHHH you just got pwned! jk, anyways its an ok model looks too blocky imo.
Your mom is like a shotgun,2 cocks and she blows.

OHHHH OWNED!!!! :wink: :lol:
...left for good
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Post by fishface617 »

heh patrick nice one.

anyways good job on the model ravnz
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Post by rossmum »

Patrickssj6 wrote:
The science of Kaboom wrote:
cooldude5990 wrote: 8 the stock isnt fluent with the gun and its more rounded
Your moms not fluent with the gun! OOHHHHH you just got pwned! jk, anyways its an ok model looks too blocky imo.
Your mom is like a shotgun,2 cocks and she blows.

OHHHH OWNED!!!! :wink: :lol:
OH SNAP. YOU WIN.

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Post by Hyperdash »

Not bad looks cool but if you need extra info on the real gun (Firing rates, ammo count, etc.) check this page out: AK-47 Info. It has a pic of it as well
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Post by tumideon821 »

sorry about bump but maybe to get the poly count down make it a Ak47SU, the SU has a folding stock on it, it should be a winch sort of thing near the back of the gun where the stock meets that actual thing, it would look more hollow and everything

The clip does need a little more detial i got some suggestions (there are two clips)

1) Bananna Clip:
-It has grooves down it in the center
-It is not so curvey, it is actually pretty straight

2) Barrel Clip:
-It looks like a drum fed weapon (World War II Thompson, ect), without grooves i believe
-Inside the barrel it is belt fed, so the FP model of the clip should have the .223 rounds out of it (.223 is really small, it looks like the 7.62NATO and .302 Winchester but a lot smaller)

It would look cool if it had a bayonet :D just some friendly suggestions it is your gun not mines
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Thanks for the suggestions mate, but I think I'm going to leave the model as is. It's already been put into Team deltaHalo's newest mod, so I think I'm keeping it like this for now. I may revisit this one, though.
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Post by The science of Kaboom »

Patrickssj6 wrote:
The science of Kaboom wrote:
cooldude5990 wrote: 8 the stock isnt fluent with the gun and its more rounded
Your moms not fluent with the gun! OOHHHHH you just got pwned! jk, anyways its an ok model looks too blocky imo.
Your mom is like a shotgun,2 cocks and she blows.

OHHHH OWNED!!!! :wink: :lol:
:cry: You big meanie!!!! jk lmfao that was awesome!!!
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Post by Deathshop »

Yay an ak nice model hope to see the finished version soon.
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Post by Nitemare »

needs something, i just cant put my finger on it....
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Post by SnaFuBAR »

you didn't need to bump this topic :?
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