my first ever model+bad skin

tolak · Post by **tolak** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:23 pm

me and a m8 decided to start making maps so i started on the models here is my first ,the Uzi:)

Jsk1610 · Post by **Jsk1610** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:34 pm

Pretty good for a first.

CptnNsan0 · Post by **CptnNsan0** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:35 pm

not to bad for a first but looks a little messed up at the top. and make the handle and back straighter

tolak · Post by **tolak** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:38 pm

ok thx for tips

handle and back were like that in the picture i was working from and i thought top was messed up aswell couldnt get it right

Jsk1610 · Post by **Jsk1610** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:45 pm

hmm... looks pretty accurate.

CptnNsan0 · Post by **CptnNsan0** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:54 pm

at the bottom of the handle it looks like a jagged edge is sticking oout. fix that and it will be good

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:44 pm

Eh...it's decent. Keep at it.

xXtR1Xm1Xx · Post by **xXtR1Xm1Xx** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:17 pm

I think it looks alright. GJ.

darco9x2 · Post by **darco9x2** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 4:39 pm

since you have max, next time press F9 and show us a render instead of a screen shot.

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 5:33 pm

it's a poor model, but you're learning. keep at it. check out tutorials, ditch box and spline modeling.

here, you need these...

http://www.halomods.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=18742
http://tutorials.moddb.com/16/beretta-9 ... -tutorial/

check those out, and model like that from now on. start plane modeling early. don't listen to people who are mediocre or poor at modeling when they tell you it's good, nice job.

hopefully, you take the criticsm into consideration and follow those tutorials.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 6:49 pm

Snaf hit the point well. Don't mistake his harsh critique as a mean spirited comment, that was actually a nice helpful one from someone with as high of standards as his. And in my semi-experienced opinion, it's an "alright" model. Good for learning, but not much else. Take this and turn it into what I know you can. The human imagination is a powerful thing, use it.