[Large Piece] I dont know why I gave you my heart

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 10:42 am

This is a new style for me, just wanted to try it out.

And yeah, it is an emo picture.

I don't know why I gave you my heart,
cause at times it feels so wrong.

The city images were taken by me, and yes, that is a picture of me in the center.

dos mes · Post by **dos mes** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 10:48 am

You suck;

I'm just messin' with you. I like all the effects and such. Looks pretty good

And I'm sure you meant the heart to look like that, but it looks a little too spray paintish to me.

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 11:27 am

Dos Mes wrote:And I'm sure you meant the heart to look like that, but it looks a little too spray paintish to me.

Yeah, it didnt look as good when I had it more realistic.

Thanks for the comments though, this took a long time to do, because I experimented alot along the way.

angry man · Post by **angry man** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 12:06 pm

Well i'm anti-Emo but i do like the style

Grunt Rebel · Post by **Grunt Rebel** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 12:13 pm

I am not to fond of the text but other then that its good IMO. Nice work!

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 12:17 pm

Grunt Rebel wrote:I am not to fond of the text but other then that its good IMO. Nice work!

Yeah, I tried a grungier one, but it didnt really work out.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 3:10 pm

That is really really impressive. Emos suck, but your picture owns the internets

Sandman · Post by **Sandman** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 3:42 pm

Looks really busy IMO.. text needs something to be desired. It would be really cool if you could make the heart in vector and then made a big spraypaint 'spray' behind it that's dripping down. You could prolly find brushes to do the 'spray' thing.

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:03 pm

Sandman wrote:Looks really busy IMO.. text needs something to be desired. It would be really cool if you could make the heart in vector and then made a big spraypaint 'spray' behind it that's dripping down. You could prolly find brushes to do the 'spray' thing.

If I used photoshop

But yeah, its supposed to be busy, its actually less busy than it was before.

I agree with you on improving the heart though

Sandman · Post by **Sandman** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:14 pm

Do you use Gimp or something?

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:17 pm

Sandman wrote:Do you use Gimp or something?

I think he uses Fireworks.

Grunt Rebel · Post by **Grunt Rebel** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:19 pm

Fireworks.

angry man · Post by **angry man** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 6:34 pm

Photoshop>Fireworks

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 7:09 pm

Anyway, the only problem I have with it is around you (the render) it could use some more creative blending.

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 7:19 pm

gh0570fchurch wrote:Anyway, the only problem I have with it is around you (the render) it could use some more creative blending.

Yeah, I guess a glow doesnt cut it. As I said, Im new at this style, and all advice is appreciated.

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 7:39 pm

I'm not complaining at all, though. I'm excited that you're trying something new.

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Sat Sep 23, 2006 5:59 am

gh0570fchurch wrote:I'm not complaining at all, though. I'm excited that you're trying something new.

ty, it was really fun to make. I suppose if I get bored Ill try to make another.

Grave · Post by **Grave** » Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:53 pm

it looks noice.

elleagwire · Post by **elleagwire** » Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:19 pm

Well, I think it is quite a catch! Any woman will agree on me on that!

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[cc]z@nd! · Post by **[cc]z@nd!** » Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:44 pm

the little things i don't like:

1: render blending
2: heart blending
3: red velntine hearts don't seem to fit into the emo picture. maybe if they were a bit grungier they would
4: i think the fighter should be replaced with another bird, imo

the things i like:

1: this evidently took a long time, and had effort put into it.
2: you're trying something new, that's always fun to experiment with things
3: it's very good overall

kepp working, this is a pretty good job!