Covenant Invasion

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 2:34 pm

My first Deviation!

Now, before you click on the link, I'd like to make something clear, and maybe you guys can help me with this. I'm somewhat satisfied with it, but there's something I'm confused about. The Covenant cruisers don't really have much depth to them. How would I go about making that look better?

Well, anyway, here you go:

Covenant Invasion

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 4:22 pm

maybe change the reflections.
and change the formations, they look a little fake.
is this done in max?

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 8:48 pm

part of it was done in gmax, but mostly in PScs2

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 11:29 pm

maybe have them flying from behind the camera, like 2 infront and one just overhead. and then the jets coming in formation.

V0Lt4Ge · Post by **V0Lt4Ge** » Sun Aug 27, 2006 8:24 am

The text kinda kills it. =\

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Sun Aug 27, 2006 6:03 pm

The Halo doesnt make a smooth transition to the foreground.

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:44 pm

I don't really like it, but I think it's okay for my first.