yeah, your current is sweet, and the render is blended weird; i can see some of the background through his shirt. find another way to blend him other than lowering his opacity.
btw, i like the second one better, the blue looks better darker.
ASPARTAME: in your diet soda and artificial sweeteners. also, it's obviously completely safe. it's not like it will cause tumors or anything. >.>
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