[Second Model] Beretta CX4 Storm

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[Second Model] Beretta CX4 Storm

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Here's my second model, a Beretta CX4 Storm. 3,750 polies. :?


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Seems a little narrow, but holy crap. That's awesome.

Your second model pwns all of mine so far... I need those plane tuts... >_>
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Post by [cc]z@nd! »

nice model. the worst i see is stupid shader groups, but that's hard to prevent. looks like it'd be fun to use, nice model! especially compared to my attempts.
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Post by maca_§ »

Not bad at all, well done.
Looks a lil too smooth in places but what do I know about modeling :p.
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Post by The science of Kaboom »

looks cool.
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Post by SnaFuBAR »

thin and flat, with some obvious innaccuracies, but good attention to detail, especially for a second model. i suggest looking over your references more carefully, and fixing this model up.
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Post by Doctor »

Nice, Ravn.

Once again though, your a little thin :?

I guess it is better then being fat :D.

sorry, lousy humor ^^
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Post by JK-47 »

I saw that at the gun store yesterday, your model is way to thin at the bottom, other than that it looks pretty good.
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Any other comments? I was hoping to get some more. :o
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Post by mR_r0b0to_v2 »

it's a nicely made model, but the smoothing groups could use a bit more work, the barrel is too thin, and the scope needs more details :D
also try rendering on a lighter background, its so much easier to see

that is all :D
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Post by Grunt Rebel »

Looks cool! A little to thin for me tho.
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Post by cooldude5990 »

SnaFuBAR wrote:thin and flat, with some obvious innaccuracies, but good attention to detail, especially for a second model. i suggest looking over your references more carefully, and fixing this model up.
everything i was going to say lol. but thats very good for a secound model
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Post by Monk »

looks like a lightweight future sniper nice job
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Post by (sccan)dudz »

i love it its 8) :!: :!: :!:
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Post by Darco »

oooh a left handed rifle. i love it!
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Bump?

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Post by rossmum »

V0Lt4Ge wrote:Bump?

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Yeah. Ugh.

Good a model as it is, DON'T BUMP.
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Post by mR_r0b0to_v2 »

o.0

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Shhh. I blame Snakes... on a Plane.
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Post by gh0570fchurch »

rossmum wrote:Seems a little narrow
Yeah, that's the first thing I noticed, but otherwise it's pretty good. Maybe you could widen it up a bit.
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