My first model... ever

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My first model... ever

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I'm working on a new mod which will be out relatively soon and it will feature my first models ever :D now they're very bad and poorly made but I could use some feedback and learn how to improve on them so here's my first model for the MC to give him angel wings...

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Post by SS-kojak »

Can we see it in game? I bet it will(sadly) be all crapped up and horrible.
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lol so do I, I'm expecting it to end up looking as dishoveled as the horse from the dawn of warfare (although it still looked cool :D) erm, I'm trying to get it in-game but its saying "imput string was not in a correct format" whenever I go to import the model.... If anyone has ne ideas please help :/
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Post by citruspers »

they look like wings, but there is a lot to improve :)
for a first model though, it's good, i think
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you should make the wings thinner, because they look fat right now lol
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i agree with church, wings are kinda fat... obese angels, hmmmm...
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yea I'm gonna make them a lot thinner and more defined edges but it wont inject so I cant even test it >>;
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Post by [cc]z@nd! »

that blows. try doin it next tiem usin the biped's own vertices.
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bipids own verticies? X.X as in build wings from the pre-exsisting verticies in the MC? because that might be why I cant inject...
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Post by cooldude5990 »

not bad for a first model, can we see a wire so we can better help?
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I dont think you can render in wireframe (or atleast idk how to)...
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just use the prnt screen button if you dont know how, its easier than explaining
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[cc]z@nd! wrote:i agree with church, wings are kinda fat... obese angels, hmmmm...
I dont.. i think they should be mechanicle wings.. with boosters and such.... make um big and bulky... cuase do you think nice pettie wings are gonna look good on the big rough bulky MC?
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Lol I think he's trying to inject it into Halo PC. You have to do it in CE. :wink:
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Lol I think he's trying to inject it into Halo PC. You have to do it in CE
err, halo2 buddy :D

but I always did want to make a CE map... if I did make halo CE maps I'm sure they'd be easier than h2... cause all the tools are already available... Humm, you my friend just got me into modding CE :wink:
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