Render Gallery Submission Thread (Updated 8-13) 56k warning

=sw=warlord · Post by **=sw=warlord** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 11:50 am

that is a simple pose.

Sarb · Post by **Sarb** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 11:52 am

and thats why you post it here

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 11:58 am

=sw=warlord wrote:ok fine i didnt even see the link there.
be an ***.
this is ment to be the render gallery am i not right and this is a render correct?
well then.

It's been stated many times that this thread is for submissions of renders with a purpose. Not omg lewk wat i did!

Render Submission Thread Checklist!
[X] Does my render have an environment?
[X] Did I spend more than 5-10 minutes on my scene?
[X] Is my render up to par with the rest of the renders in the gallery?

AjemsuhgaoII · Post by **AjemsuhgaoII** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 12:27 pm

GametagAeonFlux wrote: Render Submission Thread Checklist!
[X] Does my render have an environment?
[X] Did I spend more than 5-10 minutes on my scene?
[X] Is my render up to par with the rest of the renders in the gallery?

Um...neither of my renders that are in the gallery had environments, but I did spend far more than 5-10 minutes on them, and I think they were up to par with the rest.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 12:28 pm

AjemsuhgaoII wrote:Um...neither of my renders that are in the gallery had environments, but I did spend far more than 5-10 minutes on them, and I think they were up to par with the rest.

Bleh...2/3 works.

trepdimeflou · Post by **trepdimeflou** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 1:20 pm

Offtopic argument removed.

For further reference:

Render Submission Thread Checklist
[X] Does my render have an environment?
[X] Did I spend more than 5-10 minutes on my scene?
[X] Is my render up to par with the rest of the renders in the gallery?

If you want constructive crits, post your render in the stickied discussion and showcase topic. It exists solely for that purpose.

spartanx5 · Post by **spartanx5** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 3:44 pm

Thanks to Veegie for teaching me how to apply detail maps, I bring the public two new renders, much better then my last, enjoy.

Jordan · Post by **Jordan** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 4:03 pm

visor needs work, the plate floor looks kinda cool

benman08 · Post by **benman08** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 4:17 pm

It appears that you mc armor is missing reflections, as do the plate floor. And why is he leaning against the a texture that is usually on the ground, is he laying down?

spartanx5 · Post by **spartanx5** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 4:35 pm

there, I edited them.

Morg · Post by **Morg** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:47 pm

Ugh...cool. What's that thing MC is sitting in?

benman08 · Post by **benman08** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:54 pm

The chair the prophets float on. I also just noticed you have a uvw error near the toe area on the mc.

CabooseJr · Post by **CabooseJr** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 7:01 pm

lol, its the prophet chair

benman08 · Post by **benman08** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 7:06 pm

"Assassination"

HK-47 · Post by **HK-47** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 7:14 pm

Pwn-efful benman.

Veegie[Temp] · Post by **Veegie[Temp]** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 7:41 pm

Your Spartans doesn't appear to have a detail map.
That blur effect is very obnoxious.
The Blue Spartan looks like he was standing behind the Orange Spartan and simply hit him, it is hard to see how motion is being depicted(excluding the slight foot movement), much less a powerful enough strike to end another Spartan's life.
And judging how the Orange Spartan's feet are exactly side by side, he must have been standing, and he appears to have had no weapon?
So you have a Spartan that is standing behind another standing Spartan that has no weapon, and I suppose he decided to end his life.

BFIGHTER · Post by **BFIGHTER** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 7:45 pm

veegie you are kinda funny sometimes
"and i guess he decided to end his life" lol i found that kinda funny.
But anyway i like the scene alot, its pretty cool, but the blur is a little weird some places. The blue MC seems a lil stiff.

HK-47 · Post by **HK-47** » Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:40 am

Veegie wrote:Your Spartans doesn't appear to have a detail map.
That blur effect is very obnoxious.
The Blue Spartan looks like he was standing behind the Orange Spartan and simply hit him, it is hard to see how motion is being depicted(excluding the slight foot movement), much less a powerful enough strike to end another Spartan's life.
And judging how the Orange Spartan's feet are exactly side by side, he must have been standing, and he appears to have had no weapon?
So you have a Spartan that is standing behind another standing Spartan that has no weapon, and I suppose he decided to end his life.

Slayer match mb?

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:52 am

If that blur is depth of field, try scaling everything up so the effect isn't as...drastic.

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:55 am

HK-47 wrote:
Veegie wrote:Your Spartans doesn't appear to have a detail map.
That blur effect is very obnoxious.
The Blue Spartan looks like he was standing behind the Orange Spartan and simply hit him, it is hard to see how motion is being depicted(excluding the slight foot movement), much less a powerful enough strike to end another Spartan's life.
And judging how the Orange Spartan's feet are exactly side by side, he must have been standing, and he appears to have had no weapon?
So you have a Spartan that is standing behind another standing Spartan that has no weapon, and I suppose he decided to end his life.
Slayer match mb?

doesn't explain why orange spartan has no weapon.