[WIP]Assault Rifle/Autosniper?

Orchid · Post by **Orchid** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 9:07 am

Still to finish it off with details, texturing and so on, taking crit to improve it.

V0Lt4Ge · Post by **V0Lt4Ge** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 9:20 am

it kinda looks like you combined 2 guns into 1.

it's pretty good.

Snoopchicken · Post by **Snoopchicken** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 10:30 am

I like it

If you can get that in the game, for sure it will have my download

8/10

Orchid · Post by **Orchid** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 10:42 am

Wire shade renders.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 11:12 am

Looks pretty cool man, nice job.

Caboose{SE} · Post by **Caboose{SE}** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 11:43 am

not bad but looks a little high in poly try using cut or line when making weapons

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 12:55 pm

neat concept, bad proportons. looks like the gun was stretched vertically and stock end was smashed.

keep working on it and it could turn out nice.

oh, and try using 8 or 10 sides when making cylindrical parts. however many you have is way too many.

Orchid · Post by **Orchid** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 12:58 pm

Yeah I wasn't modelling with games inmind, just for fun and so on.
I know I could have easily lowered the poly count when making it, decided not to. It's only a WIP as i've said, still to be porportioned correctly etc.

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:06 pm

when you model, you should START with the right proportions, not work them out later. if you do it the way you're going, you're going to turn out with a product less appealing than what it could have been. you'll be changing negative/ postive space interactions and details will change.

right now it's chubby and short. i would suggest redoing a lot of this thing.

Orchid · Post by **Orchid** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:32 pm

For something that's not finished, easily edited and not designed to be any existing weapon.

Axel18 · Post by **Axel18** » Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:08 pm

Well it is good for an idea.

Im sure many people would take it and put it in game. Anyway it looks like a early version of the new XM8. Just make the stock sliding like on the M4, and put two tripod legs on the bottom of the front handel and it will look ausome.

Im not trying to flame just some sugestions.

tebteb · Post by **tebteb** » Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:10 pm

bUmp@g3 = L0cK@g3

F1N3ST · Post by **F1N3ST** » Fri Feb 03, 2006 3:04 am

It needs a longer back.

Orchid · Post by **Orchid** » Mon Feb 06, 2006 9:13 am

Couldn't get the proportions right onteh back so I left the small stock on.

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Mon Feb 06, 2006 8:42 pm

Orchid wrote:Couldn't get the proportions right onteh back so I left the small stock on.

which takes me back to what i said earlier about proportion.

Orchid · Post by **Orchid** » Tue Feb 07, 2006 4:26 pm

Indeed it does, wish I was such a perfectionist.

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Tue Feb 07, 2006 7:29 pm

it's alright. you'll learn

ds8 · Post by **ds8** » Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:02 pm

sweet model

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