New sig

Driv3r · Post by **Driv3r** » Tue Jan 10, 2006 6:53 pm

Here is my newest sig comment critisize (probably spelled that wrong) tell me what you like about it, whatever:

wes · Post by **wes** » Tue Jan 10, 2006 6:55 pm

Patrickssj6 · Post by **Patrickssj6** » Tue Jan 10, 2006 6:57 pm

The render looks strange Mb its just me

wes · Post by **wes** » Tue Jan 10, 2006 6:58 pm

no it's not just you

at first i didn't recognize that it was the master chief dual weilding smgs

lxNicktardxl · Post by **lxNicktardxl** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 11:16 am

Patrickssj6 wrote:The render looks strange Mb its just me

Very. A lot of empty space also.

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 12:26 pm

No depth at all, and the diagonal lines just make it harder to make stuff out. And I dont remember the SMG's front handgrip to be so jagged

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RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 2:12 pm

That must be where the render was cut off. But yeah, I agree with everyone above. Take out the scanlines. They don't fit at all. Creative quote, though.

Driv3r · Post by **Driv3r** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 5:34 pm

guess u guys are right i'll probably re-do it when i have the time

Patrickssj6 · Post by **Patrickssj6** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 5:51 pm

I think the background color blends so much with the render that the render is hard to see

Driv3r · Post by **Driv3r** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 6:05 pm

yeah im probably going to resize the pic and then change the color of the background

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 6:20 pm

The handgrip on the SMG looks like a bayonet, recut out the render, too.

Driv3r · Post by **Driv3r** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 7:04 pm

here i tried to redo it but i dont really like it:

Spartan Sniper · Post by **Spartan Sniper** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 7:07 pm

my suggestions:
add better text
make it so we can see the render
blend the render into the background

so far its a 4/10 but its getting better

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 7:24 pm

The new one looks like poop. The old one was better than that.

The colors dont match, and the background, well I cant tell what the background is. You get kudos for image placement though

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maca_§ · Post by **maca_§** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 9:18 pm

Spartan Sniper wrote:my suggestions:
add better text
make it so we can see the render
blend the render into the background

so far its a 4/10 but its getting better

What I was thinking.

nR`Shadow · Post by **nR`Shadow** » Thu Jan 12, 2006 6:05 am

ok yeah use new text
Make the BG have more Depth it looks almost like just clouds just to thick brushed i guess the render should be blendered a bit more yes it has the same color but not blendered make a sig next time lighter