WIP: Uzi 9mm

Burnination · Post by **Burnination** » Mon Dec 20, 2004 9:13 pm

hello again everyone...heres my uzi 9mm..just started tonight..

need to do:
finish up mesh (done)
add details
optimize polys
skin (hopefully

)

constructive criticism plz!

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Mon Dec 20, 2004 10:17 pm

pretty good! what's the poly count? modeling method?

Pie · Post by **Pie** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 4:16 am

pretty good!...just put in some smoothing groups and it will be better

Burnination · Post by **Burnination** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:13 am

plane modelling...not sure of polys...and yes smoothing will be added later

XEliteX · Post by **XEliteX** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 9:07 am

Dude that looks awsome

2 · Post by 2 » Tue Dec 21, 2004 9:19 am

8/10 - Good job, needs a bit of detail, but good.

Katarn · Post by **Katarn** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 10:14 am

too many polies used on grip. Unanimatable bolt. Sights have no accuracy whatsoever. Too many polies used on barrel. Stock is incorrect as it rotates. Clip is a box. Too flat, no surface depth.

Pie · Post by **Pie** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 12:14 pm

and jsut so you know, since some people misunderstand, katarn is not being mean, he is just telling you what to do to make it better

so take it as good advice not a dis

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 12:17 pm

yeh, and read his topic on weapon modeling. it's stickied. he makes a lot of good points.

Katarn · Post by **Katarn** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 2:55 pm

if i sound blunt, it's because i'm trying to explain something with the least and most accurate words possible. If i come out saying it's great and suck up, you'll have less ambition to impress me.

argrn · Post by **argrn** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 3:29 pm

Katarn wrote:too many polies used on grip. Too many polies used on barrel. S

Not if it is going in halo.....

Katarn · Post by **Katarn** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 4:47 pm

It's wastage, you wouldn't be able to tell the difference ingame once it's smoothed.

McFarlane · Post by **McFarlane** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:10 pm

Yes for the clip, I just make it match the thing it's inside but make it smaller.
And I add a little more on the clip though.