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Magus ,Magus underworld mage,
Magus ,Magus, your like a sage,
You carry a scythe, you live on a pike.
Magus ,Magus You do engage
in combat like a wombat.
as I sat in my chair playing Chrono Trigger,
I noticed Magus started to get bigger,
with his skythe, he made an incredible
heigh to the blue blue sky.
Magus, Magus, your not skankous,
your ambitious, like my fishes in my tank,
filled with dank.
Magus you are.....
A skyther like the sky.

-End of poem-

What you guys think?

Too many commas for my taste.

it's s'pose to be like that, it's a poem!

Sounds like one of those lame theme songs they have for those crappy Saturday cartoons.

well it's my first, but yeah, I was thinking real fast.

Meant to have any meaning or nah?

/Waits for INSANEdrive to post.

Too many errors to allow for any sort of judgment.

it's free style english. learn it in drama class.

Myth_Object wrote:it's free style english. learn it in drama class.

Free style English doesn't mean you can spell words wrong...and there's no point in writing your comma's ,like this (and don't try to say it's for style, your poem is inconsistent in comma use).

I don't like the style, or the poem. Good day to you sir.

Ombre wrote:Sounds like one of those lame theme songs they have for those crappy Saturday cartoons.

My thoughts exactly.

it does kinda sound like a theme song....atleast its not liek emo poetry

good job?

an emo wrote
I want to kill myself
With a knife
Then roll around in blood
and die

I threatened
Im gonna fucking kill you

ninja modder wrote:it does kinda sound like a theme song....atleast its not liek emo poetry

good job?

an emo wrote
I want to kill myself
With a knife
Then roll around in blood
and die

I threatened
Im gonna *** kill you

While I agree that that poem (if it was a poem at all) was emo, I fucking hate it when people misinterperate a poem's message. Just because a poem has an inner meaning of pain and suffering (which every person goes through, that's life), some dumb ass points and calls it emo. I want to punch them in the fucking face every time I hear them yell that in my English class when my teacher or a student presents a poem about personal pain (which, I feel I have to remind you, everyone goes through pain. Some things you just can't tough out or brush off your shoulder).

That being said, your poem Mr. Myth is kind of... meh. I mean, I get the meaning and all...but it reminds me of the format rappers use for thier "songs" haha.

/Ignores other posts and proceeds to rant about none of the poems in this topic have any rhythm, or even rhyme that well. (Yes, I'm fully aware that not all poems have to rhyme, but when they are meant too, they need to rhyme well.)

skythe

WTF is a skythe?

I don't get it.

Is this about Chrono Trigger?

EDIT: ah, honestly I only read about 4 lines. I'm not big into poetry and certainly not videogame poetry.

good game, bad poetry.

Wombat? Skankous? Heigh? Dank? Somebody's been drinking too much eggnog.

auerhantheman1 wrote:Somebody's been drinking too much eggnog.

Wtf?

Bad attempt at a joke.