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Cortana: The Creation - Chapter 2
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:23 pm
by metkillerjoe
Table of Contents:
-Prologue
-Chapter 1: Vanderbrook
-Chapter 2: All in a Days work
Cortana: The Creation
Prologue:
The year is 2105 Robert Stevenson was a revolutionary in neuro-science and a futurist. He controlled the company known as OPEN. The government controlled his funding, so it wasn
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:43 pm
by Tural
So, um.. what?
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 1:44 pm
by metkillerjoe
Hmm, well, I'm writing the first chapter. Just like a WIP. Post comments...
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 11:53 pm
by HPDarkness
I like it, Great job. You should really continue this, it's good!
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 2:38 am
by Geo
I count numerous grammar and punctuation errors.
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 8:00 am
by bricksarefun
iGeo wrote:I count numerous grammar and punctuation errors.
Well Firefox says your name is spelled wrong ;o
This is pretty good, but why did you write it?
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:00 am
by [cc]z@nd!
iGeo wrote:I count numerous grammar and punctuation errors.
me too, but advance copies will fix that. (copies of the book are sent out before publication and read by people. it's like beta testing)
so far, so good. keep up the work.
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:03 pm
by metkillerjoe
Chapter 1: Vanderbrook
Dr. Catherine Halsey entered the silent debriefing room. There were several men and women of the neuroscience community waiting here to hear what Catherine was about to say and do. They were all civilians, but unlike Halsey, they wore suites the closely resembled the type of suite an officer would wear aboard a ship. They were the handpicked men and women that Dr. Halsey chose to perform an operation that would create the first AI from a living person.
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:12 pm
by gh0570fchurch
Okay, I find myself very confused...
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:14 pm
by metkillerjoe
With what?
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:18 pm
by gh0570fchurch
The entire thing. I just kind of skimmed through it, I'll try to find the time to read it all the way through tomorrow.
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 5:03 pm
by metkillerjoe
I could understand it being confusing if you just skimmed.
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:23 pm
by Aumaan Anubis
people more appreciate these book-type stuff over at the
http://www.bungie.net forums.
Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 12:01 pm
by hell_knight
cortana is hot!
Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 3:54 pm
by metkillerjoe
Chapter 2: All in a Days Work
Tonegawa checked his experiment one last time. Everything had to be perfect, and the timing was critical.
Ding!
Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 4:39 pm
by r0tten
cliffs pls k thnx
Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 5:38 pm
by TomClancey
Really cool, I always like to read up on why things where made, and you portrayed it very well.