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Captured Freedom: UPDATED 66% done

Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 12:22 pm
by Hyperdash
Well I need a cameraman and I need alot of actors for all of the parts.
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Captured Freedom

Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 12:54 pm
by lxNicktardxl
Nice. I would defintely be a cameraman but my capture card is not that good.

Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 3:42 pm
by Hyperdash
low-med-high quality? If it's medium then good! lol. Send me a FR. Gamertag: Neo Hemo

Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 10:05 pm
by JK-47
Its the odd story you posted at redshadows :lol: :D

Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 10:17 pm
by Pyro Blizzard
Ill film i got a capture card! heres an example of quality:

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thats just a pic but vid quality is a lot better

Edit:Oh i almost for got, for the last bit were hes talking to the sales man and then sees the guy. Just running to him and shooting him isnt realy that exiting. What i think should happen is this:

Jack is bickering on with a salesmen when he sees the man that killed his mum and dad.

Jack: You

Jack runs over pulling out his BR

IPB SGT: Do i know you

Jack: You killed my mum and dad now your gonna ****** pay!

IPB SGT: Oh your that punk

IPB SGT punches Jack in the face and runs into the car park. Jack follows into the carpark then they chase up the car park ramp and into the door that goes down to the train tracks. The door goes to turf at the inside the little shop section. Jack stops chasing with camera on his face.

Jack:Oh shit

Camera slowly turns and looks at the direction were shotgun is and sees 10 Black suited men around the IPB SGT and they all have BR's. IPB SGT then turns and looks at Jack.

IPB SGT: Get the ******

Jack starts shooting with his BR and a big fight enagages. He shoots down about 2 of them and assasinates 1. But he gets surrounded with no hope.

IPB SOLIDER: Ready to eat led

Phoenix 4, P3 and P2 jump into the battle saving jack and all 4 of them take em all down which we can discuss how. All 4 of them are then surrounding the IPB SGT asking questions.

Jack: Wheres the alien! Wheres the one you took from me and killed my parents for!

IPB SGT: I... I..... *BANG*

A Sniper on top of turf shoots him out of the blue and laughs loudly. He then runs off. Camera Zooms in on Jack.

Jack: Im going to get my buddy if it kills me or not!

To be continued for sequel!