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[Second Model] Beretta CX4 Storm
Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 11:04 am
by RaVNzCRoFT
Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 5:45 pm
by rossmum
Seems a little narrow, but holy crap. That's awesome.
Your second model pwns all of mine so far... I need those plane tuts... >_>
Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 7:55 pm
by [cc]z@nd!
nice model. the worst i see is stupid shader groups, but that's hard to prevent. looks like it'd be fun to use, nice model! especially compared to my attempts.
Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 8:16 pm
by maca_ยง
Not bad at all, well done.
Looks a lil too smooth in places but what do I know about modeling :p.
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 11:01 am
by The science of Kaboom
looks cool.
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 11:13 am
by SnaFuBAR
thin and flat, with some obvious innaccuracies, but good attention to detail, especially for a second model. i suggest looking over your references more carefully, and fixing this model up.
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 12:13 pm
by Doctor
Nice, Ravn.
Once again though, your a little thin
I guess it is better then being fat

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sorry, lousy humor ^^
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 7:29 pm
by JK-47
I saw that at the gun store yesterday, your model is way to thin at the bottom, other than that it looks pretty good.
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 4:08 pm
by RaVNzCRoFT
Any other comments? I was hoping to get some more.

Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 4:27 pm
by mR_r0b0to_v2
it's a nicely made model, but the smoothing groups could use a bit more work, the barrel is too thin, and the scope needs more details

also try rendering on a lighter background, its so much easier to see
that is all

Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 5:45 pm
by Grunt Rebel
Looks cool! A little to thin for me tho.
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 5:59 pm
by cooldude5990
SnaFuBAR wrote:thin and flat, with some obvious innaccuracies, but good attention to detail, especially for a second model. i suggest looking over your references more carefully, and fixing this model up.
everything i was going to say lol. but thats very good for a secound model
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 8:52 pm
by Monk
looks like a lightweight future sniper nice job
Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 7:09 pm
by (sccan)dudz
Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 7:48 pm
by Darco
oooh a left handed rifle. i love it!
Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 8:05 pm
by V0Lt4Ge
Bump?
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 4:18 am
by rossmum
V0Lt4Ge wrote:Bump?
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Yeah. Ugh.
Good a model as it is, DON'T BUMP.
Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 4:24 am
by mR_r0b0to_v2
o.0
that wasn't monk, that was...
(sccan)dudz!!
Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 4:33 am
by rossmum
Shhh. I blame Snakes... on a Plane.
Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 7:16 pm
by gh0570fchurch
rossmum wrote:Seems a little narrow
Yeah, that's the first thing I noticed, but otherwise it's pretty good. Maybe you could widen it up a bit.