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[WIP] Walther P22
Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 6:25 pm
by TomClancey
Here is my 1st model i ever made. I used plane modeling and i used the plane modeling tuts by the one english guy who made the Baretta 9000.
PICS:
Compliments, suggestions, things i missed?
EDIT: Clay render and wireframe comeing soon.
Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 7:14 pm
by flyinrooster
i like it, whats the poly count? to me it looks like it might be a bit high, but mb not. also, the handle looks really wierd, not like my friends p22. but i still like it.
Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:18 pm
by Darkstorm995
One of the best first model i have seen. There seems to be a couple geometry errors and a lot of extra polys you can get rid of oh and the model seems too thin.
Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 11:34 pm
by SnaFuBAR
overall, the whole thing is way too thin, but you're off to a good start for your first plane model. gj. keep working on it, as there's plenty to improve on.
Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 4:05 am
by Caboose{SE}
like snaf said it's way to thin and looks like it needs major smoothing : /
but for a first it's pretty good, keep it up
Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 4:39 am
by rossmum
That's great for a first model, just needs to be wider and cleaned up a little, then smoothed.
BTW Snaf, I tried to DL the tuts, they seem to have been taken down
Anywhere else I can get them? (Tried Google, got bored and gave up after a few pages of crap)
Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 4:52 am
by cooldude5990
SnaFuBAR wrote:overall, the whole thing is way too thin, but you're off to a good start for your first plane model. gj. keep working on it, as there's plenty to improve on.
qft
and try to clean up the model next time
also try to get bigger renders and not wire ones
good job tho
Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:17 am
by TomClancey
thanks guys and again its just a WIP, so im still working on it, the poly count is i think like 2628. im not sure ill ho check again. Also Um cool dude bout the refs i only haave 2 because i have the real walther P22. So i jsut look at my real one from dif angels. and i couldnt find very big refs.(
go figure.)
Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:16 am
by The_Hushed_Casket
The grip looks a little 'crumpled' but the top is spectacular. Great for a first, keep it up.
Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:32 am
by TomClancey
ya, i just tottaly screwed the grip cus i got messed up and i couldnt get it rite. But thanks for all te comments. And the gun is so thin becuase its really that thin. Its only an inch wide.
Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 7:42 am
by crimson4245
TomClancey wrote:And the gun is so thin becuase its really that thin.
No it's not.
Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:47 am
by SnaFuBAR
Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:09 pm
by The science of Kaboom
seems way to thin but not bad.
Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 7:20 am
by skyline GT-R
rossmum wrote:
BTW Snaf, I tried to DL the tuts, they seem to have been taken down
Anywhere else I can get them? (Tried Google, got bored and gave up after a few pages of crap)
You can find it here:
http://www.sourceblog.org/index.php?ind ... ew&iden=79 , but it has alot of downloading, good tutorial though
. You have to register to the site first.
Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 5:51 pm
by TomClancey
i know this is a bump, but my ref pics were tghe 1st 2 pics i searched on google.
Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 7:12 pm
by cooldude5990
did you really have to bump this for that?
Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 10:49 pm
by rossmum
6 days... not a huge bump...
Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 11:15 pm
by Dr.Cox
10 days is a bump >_>
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:32 am
by SnaFuBAR
TomClancey wrote:i know this is a bump, but my ref pics were tghe 1st 2 pics i searched on google.
well then you should know what your gun is too thin then.
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 4:29 pm
by mR_r0b0to_v2
nice for a first model, but make it smoother
