Tranquility / Chaos
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Tranquility / Chaos
Comments, suggestions, whatever.
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Re: Tranquility / Chaos
Second one is pretty ugly, and the text in both is rather atrocious, but I still kinda like the first. Aside from from what seems to be a stream of piss, the sig holds together a nice display of color and beauty.
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Re: Tranquility / Chaos
Pretty awesome dude, but the text could use some work.
I lol'd.SHOUTrvb wrote: Aside from from what seems to be a stream of piss, the sig holds together a nice display of color and beauty.
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I think some more vibrant colors would've made the first one better.
Yeah second one is kinda funkay.
Yeah second one is kinda funkay.
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Re: Tranquility / Chaos
No.
Your use of space I feel is Horrid. Text needs work too.
Your use of space I feel is Horrid. Text needs work too.
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Re: Tranquility / Chaos
First one looks good.
My suggestions:
Make the yellow a little more opaque, it's sticking out way too much. Find a better font, either that, or work with the one you have. Maybe just put it on soft light or something, play with it for a bit.
Second one:
All together, it's not very appealing. I understand what you were trying to do, but it didn't work out so well. The background is probably the worst part of it all; try to make a background that follows the colors of Sephiroth, yet gives him the darker appearance as well. The fact that he has a blue tint shining on him makes him clash with the rest of the colors in the sig horribly.
Then the text, again, could be worked on a little more.
My suggestions:
Make the yellow a little more opaque, it's sticking out way too much. Find a better font, either that, or work with the one you have. Maybe just put it on soft light or something, play with it for a bit.
Second one:
All together, it's not very appealing. I understand what you were trying to do, but it didn't work out so well. The background is probably the worst part of it all; try to make a background that follows the colors of Sephiroth, yet gives him the darker appearance as well. The fact that he has a blue tint shining on him makes him clash with the rest of the colors in the sig horribly.
Then the text, again, could be worked on a little more.
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First looks great. That not including the yellow "stream of piss" and the text.
The second one I just don't like.
Good job. The first one's definitely an improvement from your past work.
The second one I just don't like.
Good job. The first one's definitely an improvement from your past work.
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I'm not seeing this "yellow stream of piss," that was mentioned. I thought Shout was referring to the area directly above Cloud, but that doesn't appear yellow.
You know, about the second one, I really can't see why people don't seem to like that one. I quite like it, myself.
And as for my "past work," I'm not sure as to what I've done in the past. I've "released" a couple atrocious things on Remnant, but I don't believe I've released anything here...
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Edit: Oh, wait. I do remember that I think I released a "pack" of signatures here.
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But thanks for the comment. I'll see what I can do about improving text in potential future works.
You know, about the second one, I really can't see why people don't seem to like that one. I quite like it, myself.
And as for my "past work," I'm not sure as to what I've done in the past. I've "released" a couple atrocious things on Remnant, but I don't believe I've released anything here...
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Edit: Oh, wait. I do remember that I think I released a "pack" of signatures here.
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But thanks for the comment. I'll see what I can do about improving text in potential future works.
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Re: Tranquility / Chaos
Ooooohhh...
See, my urine doesn't... "flow"... like that. But thanks for clarifying.
See, my urine doesn't... "flow"... like that. But thanks for clarifying.
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Re: Tranquility / Chaos
Well, I did consider the possibility of more than one stream. Also, for the record, I didn't mean the comment to be offensive, it just seemed like the best way to get my message across. More or less, I should say change the color or remove it. :p
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I would say try changing it. Something around your background, but not too far. A tone of light blue, or something.SHOUTrvb wrote:Well, I did consider the possibility of more than one stream. Also, for the record, I didn't mean the comment to be offensive, it just seemed like the best way to get my message across. More or less, I should say change the color or remove it. :p
Just experiment.