Uzumaki, Naruto

Senor_Grunt · Post by **Senor_Grunt** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 12:43 am

C&C please? If you want, I'll post the stock. Anything I should touch up/work on?

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:17 am

The text and lens flare kill it, and it's just a bit too random in general.

Aumaan Anubis · Post by **Aumaan Anubis** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:47 pm

Agreed. It's a little bit too random, and I dislike the text. I don't mind the flare that much, but the effect created in the top right on his back is sort of... weird/unnecessary.

Wait... that's part of the flare isn't it... >_>

kibito87 · Post by **kibito87** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 4:46 pm

Although I personally know exactly what your text says, it may be difficult to read for many.

Plus, Naruto's a chump.

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 5:47 pm

It's interesting, but the text could use some work, as others have said.

@ Kabito:
Not in Part II; when he's 15.

Senor_Grunt · Post by **Senor_Grunt** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 6:03 pm

GametagAeonFlux wrote:The text and lens flare kill it, and it's just a bit too random in general.

What do you mean by random?

Aumaan Anubis wrote: I don't mind the flare that much, but the effect created in the top right on his back is sort of... weird/unnecessary.

Wait... that's part of the flare isn't it... >_>

Thats part of the C4D in there.

TomClancey wrote:It's interesting, but the text could use some work, as others have said.

@ Kabito:
Not in Part II; when he's 15.

You mean the Shippuuden?(spelling?)

Ok, I'll work on the text a bit and see what I can do.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 6:17 pm

Senor_Grunt wrote:What do you mean by random?

i.e. you just threw a bunch of random shit on there with no direction/focus whatsoever. My suspicions have been confirmed by this sentence:

Senor_Grunt wrote:Thats part of the C4D in there.

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 6:46 pm

Senor_Grunt wrote:You mean the Shippuuden?(spelling?).

Well, yeah, because that is what Part II is called.

Also, it's 'Shippūden'.

kibito87 · Post by **kibito87** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:41 pm

He's still a chump. He needs his jinchuuriki to do any harm. Sakura as much as I don't want to admit is a badass now. I don't read the manga just watch the anime when it's released. I just want to see Naruto and Sasukei go at it...even though sasuke is a whiny bitch.

DRL333 · Post by **DRL333** » Fri Feb 29, 2008 8:11 pm

The text looks bad IMO, try my text style.