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a few pictures i made for my grad project

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 9:25 am
by Underdog
#1
Image



#2
Image


C&C por favor.

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:04 am
by JacksonCougAr
Planet is Cut Bad...

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:19 am
by Dsoup
I swear I remember seeing the second stock somewhere.

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:32 am
by Xiion
JacksonCougAr wrote:Planet is Cut Bad...
planet is cut just perfect. wtf are you talking about??

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:34 am
by CabooseJr
I see nothing wrong with the planet as well.

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:37 am
by GametagAeonFlux
I think he just means it looks out of place.

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 12:23 pm
by -Legendary-
Dsoup wrote:I swear I remember seeing the second stock somewhere.
I think he posted it a while back, with a glow effect or something.

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:40 pm
by MoDFox
Maybe this is what they're talking about?


http://screencast.com/t/dModrpywfvB
Very Small, but if you look.

not sure, but the photo doesn't look too bad.

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 8:54 am
by Underdog
thanks guys....

anything i should improve on?

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:43 am
by HPDarkness
Planet needs a slight outer/inner glow.

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 10:15 am
by Alexei
planet is made of glass :D
j/k but starts shouldn't be visible behind it

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 1:57 pm
by Underdog
good eye alexei i didnt see it.

i guess my eye isnt trained as well as yours.

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:33 pm
by Alexei
Underdog wrote:good eye alexei i didnt see it.

i guess my eye isnt trained as well as yours.
hehe
one gets accustomed to thing after a while

having spent literally hundreds of hours making sure ones own image has no such things it becomes a half reflex :P

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 6:03 pm
by Cryticfarm
Yes, alexei has become a master at this kinds of stuffs.
The planet one looks ok, but it needs a glow. And the rain drops are to big lol.

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 6:40 pm
by -Legendary-
Why can I see stars on the planet? Is it really that big?

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 6:46 pm
by halobuddha
Indeed the planet needs to be blended much better. The cut is pretty much ok except for one little nub on the left side of it. The second one could use a little bit more contrast but other than that i really like the second