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Kind of a minimalistic wallpaper I made for myself, nothing really special.. But I was just hoping to get some criticism about what is missing.
No unneeded criticism like "I don't like it" - That's fine, but that's not the reason why I'm posting this. Just want to improve, so please provide some good criticism.

Comments on my dA page are very welcome, and please check out my DevID too, while you're at it

Thanks in advance.

I don't know why, I just don't like it. I don't even see it as creative really.

I don't care for the colors.

Uhm.. Thanks for helping me improve on parts where I am not so good in? :x

its ok i guess

I like the concept. But, like stated before, colors need a little work. If I were you, I would just go white background and maybe work from there IMO. If you're piece is supposed to be simplistic, than use simplistic colors. That green is just a bit to 'active' I guess you could say.

BEEF!!! wrote:I like the concept. But, like stated before, colors need a little work. If I were you, I would just go white background and maybe work from there IMO. If you're piece is supposed to be simplistic, than use simplistic colors. That green is just a bit to 'active' I guess you could say.

Alright, thanks man. I could work from that piece of info.. ;p
Hmm, it's a bit too late for me to work on it right now, but I'll suppose I'll edit it some more..