My first LP *FIXED*

[Trulife8342]

im putting it up on dA soon, But it was fairly difficult to blend the render in, But if you can tell I kinda got some inspiration for Sarb with the BG, In all I think it came out good.

ok I fixed the text.

[SHOUTrvb]

OOOH nice. Well, the background is rather low quality compared to that sexy render. I'd 3D the cave (?) up and give it a more detailed feel.

Edit: And as far as the text goes, I would simply put a signature or something away from the focal point.

[Rockymods]

perty, me likes.

[RaVNzCRoFT]

Cool piece, but the text is still very bad.

[maca_§]

Kill the background and kill the white ring around the render.
Both of these things take away from the quality of the render and drag your eyes well away from it.

I really like the render and the general colour of this, good job.

[Trulife8342]

But you got to admit for my first large piece it isnt that bad, and I'm going to move on to another style just to see how it is, I think ill go to vector or grunge one of the two, but before I do im going to make one last C4D abstract large piece, but like I said I wont drag away from this style for long.

[Kirk]

Yes, it's very good for your first.

[-Legendary-]

Looks good!
Justa bit dark for me.

[-DeToX-]

Too much blank space, I mean some is good, but thats alot in my opinion.

Other than that it looks cool for a first, keep it up and you'll keep getting better and better.

[Dsoup]

Going against maca, I love the white ring, just not that ball thing on it.

[maca_§]

But you got to admit for my first large piece it isnt that bad, and I'm going to move on to another style just to see how it is, I think ill go to vector or grunge one of the two, but before I do im going to make one last C4D abstract large piece, but like I said I wont drag away from this style for long.

And I did but I still stand by what I said.
Personally I think you should stick with this style for a bit longer though, before you move onto other.