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4th Sig

Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 8:58 pm
by Samusaaron3
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I've tried to lean from my mistakes. What can I improve on?

Edit: Fixed name position, again

Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 9:03 pm
by Dr.Cox
2 words.

Black shit.

Get rid of it.

Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 9:10 pm
by SHOUTrvb
I dig v2. Text needs just a bit of work though. You're getting closer.

Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:09 pm
by Dsoup
V2 plus text of V1 = pretty good.

Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:34 pm
by Cuda
redo the text in V2.

Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:49 am
by SHOUTrvb
Yeah, I had to like squint to see it. =x

Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:06 am
by Samusaaron3
Is it better where it is now? Should it be larger?

Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:10 am
by CabooseJr
Redo the battle rifle.

Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:14 am
by Samusaaron3
CabooseJr wrote:Redo the battle rifle.
Can you be more specific? What on the br needs work?

Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:30 am
by CabooseJr
The lighting on it, its a bit too bright. It stands out so much.

Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:38 am
by Samusaaron3
I darkened it, compare top to bottom.

Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 12:00 pm
by Sgt.Peppers
I would like it a lot better if it were a little shorter, I think shorter sigs look better, but that's just me. :D

Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 1:06 pm
by CabooseJr
The Battle Rifle looks better now.