4th Sig

Samusaaron3 · Post by **Samusaaron3** » Sat Sep 08, 2007 8:58 pm

I've tried to lean from my mistakes. What can I improve on?

Edit: Fixed name position, again

Dr.Cox · Post by **Dr.Cox** » Sat Sep 08, 2007 9:03 pm

2 words.

Black shit.

Get rid of it.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Sat Sep 08, 2007 9:10 pm

I dig v2. Text needs just a bit of work though. You're getting closer.

Dsoup · Post by **Dsoup** » Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:09 pm

V2 plus text of V1 = pretty good.

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:34 pm

redo the text in V2.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:49 am

Yeah, I had to like squint to see it. =x

Samusaaron3 · Post by **Samusaaron3** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:06 am

Is it better where it is now? Should it be larger?

CabooseJr · Post by **CabooseJr** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:10 am

Redo the battle rifle.

Samusaaron3 · Post by **Samusaaron3** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:14 am

CabooseJr wrote:Redo the battle rifle.

Can you be more specific? What on the br needs work?

CabooseJr · Post by **CabooseJr** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:30 am

The lighting on it, its a bit too bright. It stands out so much.

Samusaaron3 · Post by **Samusaaron3** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:38 am

I darkened it, compare top to bottom.

Sgt.Peppers · Post by **Sgt.Peppers** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 12:00 pm

I would like it a lot better if it were a little shorter, I think shorter sigs look better, but that's just me.

CabooseJr · Post by **CabooseJr** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 1:06 pm

The Battle Rifle looks better now.