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Shocked
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:48 pm
by -DeToX-
V1
EDIT#1: More Focal Point...
EDIT#2: Less Alias.

C&C Please.
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:51 pm
by Sarb
Looks nice,

But you can't really tell whats going on, it needs a focal point.
Did my .psd help at all?
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:53 pm
by -DeToX-
Sarb wrote:Looks nice,

But you can't really tell whats going on, it needs a focal point.
Did my .psd help at all?
I told you that link wanted me to download a program to download the file, so go back on the IRC...
I fixed up the focal point more.
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 2:13 pm
by xlRainlx
me likes it. good work, again.

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:09 pm
by Xiion
it's a little aliased in some parts, and I rather dislike the kind of yellow used in it. fix those parts and it's win.
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:22 pm
by -DeToX-
Well alias I'm willing to change, but the yellow doesn't bother me in anyway, it was meant to be that way.
Thanks for the comment. Updated Alias.
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:32 pm
by GametagAeonFlux
Too busy, too random, nothing flows, and the colors look nasty together.

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:08 pm
by DJ_Gnomey
God, why did you add the text, and make it look like you peed it on.
Needs to have a better color schee, it's focal point is ok, but the colors need to be fixed.
