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First space art I've made in a while.

http://noscottno.deviantart.com/art/Interval-62587770

Neato, but it's a little boring and the clouds look unnatural.

I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.

Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.

Yup, it's painted.

noscottno wrote:

Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.

Yup, it's painted.

I thought I would be nice and you would get the hint, but obviously you didn't. It's painted badly.

Dsoup wrote:

noscottno wrote:

Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.

Yup, it's painted.

I thought I would be nice and you would get the hint, but obviously you didn't. It's painted badly.

Any pointers? What type of motion should I make with my arm? What types of brushes?because you seem to act like you are all knowing

Pretty good concept, but those black parts in front of the light looks rather strange. I think it could use some darker parts, seems rather blue, even for a nebula.

The painting is really scratchy and unrealistic, where as the planets look much more detailed. You've certainly become a better painter, and this is pretty nice other than the things mentioned above.

noscottno wrote:

Dsoup wrote:

noscottno wrote:

Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.

Yup, it's painted.

I thought I would be nice and you would get the hint, but obviously you didn't. It's painted badly.

Any pointers? What type of motion should I make with my arm? What types of brushes?because you seem to act like you are all knowing

11. Do not yell and make a fuss because someone gave you criticism. If everyone only said good things about your work, how would you improve?

I'm making a fuss? I'm asking for critism other than "it looks bad".

I did, it's actually quite detailed.

Dsoup wrote:I don't like it that much... The nebula looks painted and unrealistic, and that would be just dandy if everything else was like that. I also think it should be darker so the nebula would stand out more and get even more of a warm, glowing feel. Main thing is the whole unrealistic painted business.

Actually, I really like it. I mean yeah, the clouds don't look very convincing, but that's my favorite part about it... Call me weird..

Just because something doesn't look convincing doesn't mean it can't be artistically well-done. I quite like it.

Thank's guys. I plan on making another one soon (may start today, dunno).