HaloMods "Classic" Read-only Archive

Posted: **Sat Jul 21, 2007 8:16 pm**

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3088 ... undra3.png

rnc

Posted: **Sat Jul 21, 2007 8:18 pm**

good concept, needs more depth and detail.

Posted: **Sat Jul 21, 2007 8:20 pm**

Draw your perspective lines on a different layer so you can disable them...it may be a concept drawing, but we don't need to see them.

Random erased bits on the left look kinda weird, and your strokes are still a little too definite. I suggest using the Corel Painter line of programs instead of Photoshop for digital painting/drawing.

Posted: **Sat Jul 21, 2007 8:50 pm**

Looks nice, but like GTAF said it would look a lot better without the grids.

Posted: **Sat Jul 21, 2007 9:17 pm**

reminds me the inside of the Combine Citadel of City 17.

Posted: **Sat Jul 21, 2007 9:21 pm**

CabooseJr wrote:reminds me the inside of the Combine Citadel of City 17.

I was just thinking that...

I love it noscottno, you are pretty good at that tablet

Posted: **Sat Jul 21, 2007 10:26 pm**

The building's shapes and colors are good, but the perspective lines and the random squiggly black brushes and the solid eraser on the very left kill it for me.

Posted: **Sat Jul 21, 2007 10:32 pm**

Cool.

I like.

Posted: **Sun Jul 22, 2007 5:52 pm**

looks beautiful

Posted: **Sun Jul 22, 2007 5:54 pm**

I love it. Can't wait to see the final.

Posted: **Sun Jul 22, 2007 8:38 pm**

gh0570fchurch wrote:I love it. Can't wait to see the final.

Cough...it's done I don't plan on working on it anymore. Thanks guys.

Posted: **Sun Jul 22, 2007 11:13 pm**

needs vocal point and little more detail

Posted: **Sun Jul 22, 2007 11:18 pm**

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Posted: **Mon Jul 23, 2007 8:50 am**

ok ya realize that now i was in a hurry when i looked at it, but some colors are to light.

Posted: **Mon Jul 23, 2007 1:11 pm**

I thought I nailed the colors pretty good :/. I guess it's just a matter of opinion.