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this picture means alot to me, especially when i took it. i was grounded for arson for a couple of months, so i had to do something over that time, so i took some emotive portraits, and this one came out best. it may not be of the best quality, coming from a 5 megapixel camera, but it was all i had. it came out great. please comment!

it looks very nice....i dont know...but this picture speeks to me...it sounds like it meens alot to you...and just looking at it...it sends so many messages....it soeaks to me like few pictures do...

Ah.. arson... those were the days. I really like this man, it was a good choice to convert it to black and white because that connects more to this scene, makes it seem more peaceful. 10/10 for photography and taking my breath away

its weard....there like so many emotions.... it reminds me of times with my girl brittany,and it makes me feel happy...but yet some how the tree seems metiforacal for something i cant discribe....i mix of hate anxiety,strong relationships and anger....i know it doesnt make sence but its just strange...this allmost useless but yes neaningfull picture....i fell like writing something about it now....im going to helium to write about it....this picture has inspired me in sooo many ways...

sorry for the double post....

but here is my rought copy of what this picture triggered in my mind.

sitting alone on a beautiful beach
i can't help but stop and wonder
of things to children whom i long to teach
of places i have been, past the bridge, and over yonder
still i sit and stare in awe
and hear the crows croak and caw
simply sitting there along the shore
simply sitting and thinking of nothing more
large majestic trees sat still behind me
my eyes were open but i was asleep consciously
and i sat there and pondered, "must there be something more"
then i thought "what of life before"
surely there must be something more
i sat there wishing that there was more
i wished more and more, more so that it was sure
the love i had been longing, a love that was true
this love was amazing, so fresh. . . so new
this was all so true... and it started with the inspiration
...coming from you


Edit.there is much more,and if you want to see it go to www.helium.com
and search for user youhoo7

thanks for the poem and all the great comments guys! i really appreciate your opinions and views being expressed! i feel so happy right now!

do you like the poem...that took my like i dunno a while to finish

i am, as a matter of fact, a fan of poetry, and my great great great uncle was a very famous poet. i loved the poem, but you should make some of the rhyming words a bit more complex, just to add a better feel to it.

yeah i would...but most of the people on this site are like 12-13 and dont understand..so i put it in easy english...and as i said its a rough copy of the bigger poem

is the bigger one done yet?

naw...im still whriting stuff out on papper

nice. i feel great now,knowing that my artwork is being appreciated so much!

i have suggested it before...but since poetry is an art form...dont you think there should be an other catagory for this....i have found sites where you can imput work...but you can get feedback like on this site

deviantart allows you to upload poetry.

yeah i know...but the feedback isnt the same

hmm... i dont know then, try googling