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The Fallen
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:56 pm
by d3mon
Yea well i'm new to sketching i've just never really tried to draw anything much before.
So here this is its meant to be a Fallen Angel.
And i touched it up in photoshop 7.
Sketch
Touched up
Please rate */10
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:08 pm
by Dr.Cox
Touched Up FTW
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:19 pm
by SHOUTrvb
7/10, I really like it. I think it would look better as a part of a large piece though.
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:54 pm
by Jordan
Wasn't really impressed with the initial drawing, but the touchups make it look really nice.
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:02 pm
by JK-47
Yeah, I didn't like the drawing much but I really like the photoshoped version. Very cool.
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 12:55 am
by d3mon
Thx guys and yea i know i'm bad at drawing but photoshop eases the pain
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:04 am
by Tural
Armed Civilian wrote:Touched Up FTW
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:59 am
by destroyer69
Looks very nice.
Good job.
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 12:50 pm
by Ombre
Initial one look like a 30 second sketch, and lacks value contrast.
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:44 pm
by SHOUTrvb
Ombre wrote:Initial one look like a 30 second sketch, and lacks value contrast.
How about the second one Mister Elitist?
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 2:36 pm
by Andrew_b
nice..it looks cool, the second one i mean. the first one is better than i can draw
( i think my sigs show that)
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 3:15 pm
by Leiukemia
Edited one looks great
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 6:45 pm
by Ombre
SHOUTrvb wrote:Ombre wrote:Initial one look like a 30 second sketch, and lacks value contrast.
How about the second one Mister Elitist?
Yea, and I was the one being unnecessarily rude?
The second one is better, not too sure about the coloring, but I guess it works out. Overall it would have turned out much better on some nice drawing paper, you can always redraw it and use this one as a study though.
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 8:35 pm
by youhoo7
SHOUTrvb wrote:7/10, I really like it. I think it would look better as a part of a large piece though.
well sure...but sketches arent allways supposed..to be full...by that i ment his sketch is what it is.....a sketch...so for a sketch i give it a 10/10
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 9:45 pm
by d3mon
thx guys and ombre's right it was a thirty second sketch he wasn't being rude at all but just giving his opinion and when i get some drawing paper i might try to create a larger peice.
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 9:51 pm
by Ombre
youhoo7 wrote:SHOUTrvb wrote:7/10, I really like it. I think it would look better as a part of a large piece though.
well sure...but sketches arent allways supposed..to be full...by that i ment his sketch is what it is.....a sketch...so for a sketch i give it a 10/10
He can still retain the gesture style if he adds some background to it, even something as simple as a wall and a floor can vastly improve a drawing.